Talk:Hillel Norry

Addressing promotional tone
Hi. You recently added the promotional tag tone. How do you envision the article changing to address this? The tag mentions three topics: promotional language, inappropriate ELs, and NPOV issues. Of these, which apply here? Freelance-frank (talk) 17:25, 11 October 2021 (UTC)


 * It seems that the language is promotional, and the whole article reads like an advertisement. I'm not saying that something is wrong, but if he is known in the community, some commentaries or criticism of his work should exist, and that can be added. Artem.G (talk) 17:43, 11 October 2021 (UTC)
 * Thanks for your feedback. I'd like to push harder for actionable steps. To your statement, "if he is known in the community, some commentaries or criticism of his work should exist, and that can be added", I have not seen much criticism of the article subject in RS, so I didn't include any. Regarding your feeling of promotional language, could you specify examples of sentences you find promotional? And could you specify which criteria from the promotional tone link in the tag you feel is most applicable? Freelance-frank (talk) 21:47, 11 October 2021 (UTC)