Talk:Hina Rabbani Khar/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Vibhijain (talk · contribs) 16:50, 14 January 2013 (UTC)

Hi Zia! I will review this article tomorrow. ♛♚★Vaibhav Jain★♚♛ Talk Email 16:50, 14 January 2013 (UTC)


 * "The PPP secured a plurality of the ... Yousaf Raza Gillani as Prime Minister." - Reference needed.
 * "She was appointed foreign minister ... ran high over the Raymond Davis incident."- Again ref needed.
 * S. M. Krishna is the common name
 * who said --> which said
 * When Khar herself said that Pakistan has "regretted its actions in 1971," then why is the word "alleged" used?
 * The word genocide should link to 1971 Bangladesh atrocities and Liberation War of 1971 should be Bangladesh Liberation War.
 * Mention that Sheikh Hasina is the Bangladeshi PM.
 * Use Pakistani Rupees instead of Rupees.
 * Expand NRO.
 * It was not the Indian newspapers which alleged the romantic affair.
 * This has a lot of information which needs to be added. ♛♚★Vaibhav Jain★♚♛  Talk Email 11:37, 15 January 2013 (UTC)
 * I'm busy right now and'll do this by the weekend. Thanks, Zia Khan 17:12, 17 January 2013 (UTC)
 * All of the above concerns have been addressed. Thanks for the review. Zia Khan 14:51, 20 January 2013 (UTC)
 * Article passed. Congrats. ♛♚★Vaibhav Jain★♚♛  Talk Email 10:47, 21 January 2013 (UTC)