Talk:Hiranandani Gardens, Mumbai

GA comments
Hi ! Am not doing a GA review as such. But just did a copyedit and noticed some things that would require fixing. §§Dharmadhyaksha§§ {Talk / Edits} 07:00, 2 November 2015 (UTC)
 * Most of the references and mainly claims of notability are sourced to WP:PRIMARY sources which would require to be changed.
 * Have added few inline maintenance tags.
 * Legal problems that keep coming in newspapers now and then are all missing. Doesn't make it neutral.,
 * Transformation Of Powai, a documentary by Nat Geo probably talks a lot about this area. (I haven't seen it. So please check if that requires mentioning.)
 * There are various things which require mentioning per "Broad in its coverage" clause of GA criteria when talking about a locality; like population, demographics, facilities - water supply source, drainage, waste management, electricity source, etc. Some obvious doubts come in mind like if the Hiranandani group does the maintenance work, where does it get money from? How is this deal worked out with the local governing body i.e. BMC in this case?

GA nomination withdrawn
GA nomination withdrawn by nominator as per this. Arun Kumar SINGH (Talk)  17:47, 7 December 2015 (UTC)
 * Please post this at Talk:Hiranandani Gardens, Mumbai/GA1 so the reviewer can close the GA review accordingly. §§Dharmadhyaksha§§ {Talk / Edits} 05:18, 8 December 2015 (UTC)


 * §§Dharmadhyaksha§§, done. Arun Kumar SINGH (Talk)  05:39, 8 December 2015 (UTC)