Talk:Historiography of the causes of World War I

War Guilt Clause
The claim that the "war guilt clause" of the Treaty of Versailles influenced Allied historians' judgement is unsupported and highly suspect. It contradicts what is written at Article 231 of the Treaty of Versailles, which I am more inclined to trust. Frankly, it sounds like German apologetics. 99.249.15.40 (talk) 20:35, 9 February 2014 (UTC)
 * Allied historians during the war made the guilt accusation which was incorporated into the treaty. The majority of Allied historians in 1920s said Germany was guilty (though a minority of "revisionists" was quite active). and  . Rjensen (talk) 21:15, 2 March 2014 (UTC)

Gerhard Ritter
I hold no candle for Ritter, but the statement "He was against democracy, blaming it as the cause for the Second World War, and supported authoritarian, totalitarian government" seems to be an assessment or judgement without any referenced source and looks dangerously close to personal opinion. Helvetius (talk) 12:56, 18 July 2014 (UTC)


 * Ritter definitely thought monarchy was better than democracy (at least for Germany), and supported authoritarian government (which he distinguished from totalitarian government), but I don't think he blamed democracy for WWII. In any case, I've removed the whole section with that statement, because when you leave in only the supported material, it can't sustain the claim that he wasn't a disinterested historian. Adding something like "Far from acting like a disinterested historian, Ritter was clearly biased against claims that make Germany look bad because of his patriotism," although probably true, seems to do more to ruin the flow of the prose than it does to provide context. Dingsuntil (talk) 14:25, 25 January 2016 (UTC)

Economic causes with reference to the argued example of the Baghdad Railway
discussion points:

"...a major reason for Western historians to avoid the Baghdad railway when explaining the causes of the war had to do with Lenin's communist victory in 1917. Communism in the 1920s and 1930s became not just another economic option but threat to all aspects of society, particularly in the United States. Marxists had explained all causes for historical actions in economic terms and Lenin's book "Imperialism: the highest stage of Capitalism" came too close to the truth. Western historians, again US in the lead, openly established grants and encouraged economic history only to support capitalism; at the same time they minimized economic causes that could get them blacklisted as "Marxists."

"A related reason for the lack of reference to the railway even today is the Second World War. The Kaiser was not Hitler but explaining such a monumental miscalculated catastrophe as WW1 required painting Germany black in 1914. Hitler was easier and seems to confirm that Germany must have been to blame. The one country where economic history seemed most prepared to accept Marxist causes and British blame was in France, with the Annales school dominating the last half of the 20th Century; but France was also hardest hit by both wars and defending German actions did not come easily --French historians preferred to study other subjects."

--BCameron54 12:52, 19 July 2015 (UTC)

Lead Section
This article now has a lead section, suggesting that the warning that the article has no lead section can now be removed. Wikipedia best practice is that a third party should agree to this. Since I have added the introduction, can someone review this and approve (or not) the removal of the lead section template warning.Keith Johnston (talk) 20:36, 16 March 2017 (UTC)

Inaccurate statement?
In the opening section is says: " Those historians such as Fritz Fischer who believe that Germany deliberately planned a European war, once a widespread view, are now in a small minority. " However if you go through the evidence in the rest of the article this is not really supported and the article even contains evidence or suggestions indicating that say most historians currently living lean opposite way. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 2A02:C7D:86B:4A00:9852:A489:27C0:68A (talk) 09:45, 23 February 2019 (UTC)

It's a while since I posted the above. As there is seemingly no-counter argument I will make an edit to the section in question. 2A02:C7D:86B:4A00:425:F50D:A318:AD6C (talk) 00:52, 5 June 2019 (UTC)

Elsewhere
Pls see here. Ema--or (talk) 22:17, 10 January 2023 (UTC)