Talk:History of a Six Weeks' Tour/Archive 1

dyk wordings
I commented at Template talk:DYK on some DYK proposals. The first seems too negative about this article, the second doesn't use the pic, the third is written more about Mary Wollstonecraft. What about something more like "author Mary Shelley (pictured) put a positive spin in her first book on a trip that was a disaster for her". She wrote an upbeat(?) travel story out of an elopement trip in which she got pregnant, and she was rejected by her father when she returned, after all. And they ran out of money and were forced to return early. This is too much perhaps to suggest at DYK, hence i am commenting here. doncram (talk) 03:30, 5 August 2008 (UTC)

Map
I'm trying my hand at mapmaking for the first time for this article. Help would be much appreciated here. Awadewit (talk) 00:18, 6 August 2008 (UTC)

Suggestion
Cites should be unified, using. OboeCrack (talk) 15:07, 27 November 2008 (UTC)


 * I'm not sure what you mean – are you suggesting that every citation be named? If so, why? Scartol  •  Tok  05:16, 28 November 2008 (UTC)