Talk:History of the Polish–Lithuanian Commonwealth (1569–1648)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Ajh1492 (talk) 16:46, 10 June 2011 (UTC)

Comments This is going to take a couple passes to get through due to the size of the subject matter. Ajh1492 (talk) 21:58, 14 June 2011 (UTC)


 * The Lede needs to better summarize the subject matter, for this length (and complexity) of material I'd expect 2X larger.
 * You really want to put references in the Lede? The Lede is supposed to be just a summary of points covered in the article.
 * You might want to have a set of see also tags throughout the article.
 * "Unexpectedly, Henry of Valois ended up a winner." - How was it unexpected?
 * Clunky transition from Henry Valois to discussing the elected kings - you might want to move that paragraph to the top of the section.

MORE TO COME Ajh1492 (talk) 21:58, 14 June 2011 (UTC)
 * I think I've addressed the above concerns. Orczar (talk) 22:30, 27 June 2011 (UTC)

What's the status on this review? The more to come was written several weeks ago and nothing has happened since. Wizardman Operation Big Bear 19:55, 7 July 2011 (UTC)

The review is still active, it's a big and complex article. Ajh1492 (talk) 12:43, 8 July 2011 (UTC)

Passed! Ajh1492 (talk) 12:12, 12 July 2011 (UTC)