Talk:History of the Swiss Air Force/GA1

GA Review
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 * GA review (see here for criteria)

This is a nice piece of work! It could use a box with the insignia of the Air Force, etc. This will not hold up its review any longer, but I'd appreciate your adding it at your convenience.
 * 1) It is reasonably well written.
 * a (prose): b (MoS):
 * 1) It is factually accurate and verifiable.
 * a (references): b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR):
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a (major aspects): b (focused):
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * I realize these are your own pictures. Some museums prohibit the publication of their exhibits.
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * really nice job! It you're going to take it further, you'll need to get the A review at Military History, and they will help with the rest of the Manual of Style issues, and the box.  Nice nice job.  Auntieruth55 (talk) 23:10, 26 September 2009 (UTC)
 * a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * I realize these are your own pictures. Some museums prohibit the publication of their exhibits.
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * really nice job! It you're going to take it further, you'll need to get the A review at Military History, and they will help with the rest of the Manual of Style issues, and the box.  Nice nice job.  Auntieruth55 (talk) 23:10, 26 September 2009 (UTC)