Talk:History of the Swiss nationality law

This page contains a great deal of information about how one becomes a Swiss citizen in the present day, but almost all of this material is already available at Swiss nationality law. Considering the thorough coverage that page already gives to present day practices, this page should present information about practices in the past, as well as information about the rights and obligations of those who are (already) Swiss citizens, for example military service. Will Hanley (talk) 21:44, 24 November 2007 (UTC)
 * A short (one-to-three sentence) introduction at the start of the article would be useful.
 * More hyperlinks within the text, offering further information on key terms, places, events, and ideas, would be useful.
 * Format references as footnotes.
 * The phrase "plight of women" is not neutral.
 * What are all of the hyphens for?