Talk:Hitendra Narayan/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Lemonade51 (talk · contribs) 01:13, 26 November 2017 (UTC)

Taking this.
 * "Hitendra Narayan was tutored as a child by John Daniell, an English sportsman who had played top-level rugby union and cricket." is there a ref for the BIB?
 * Added. Harrias  talk 07:55, 26 November 2017 (UTC)
 * "He went up to Pembroke College, Cambridge, where he played cricket for his college, but did not make it into the university team" any idea what he read at university? Don't worry if you can't find that info, but it'd be interesting to know.
 * Sadly not. The Cambridge Alumni Database only goes up to 1900, and I can't find it elsewhere. Harrias  talk 07:55, 26 November 2017 (UTC)
 * "In 1910, Narayan qualified for Somerset based on residency" → how about "In 1910, Narayan qualified for Somerset on residency grounds." don't like based repeated the following sentence.
 * Good points, changed. Harrias  talk 07:55, 26 November 2017 (UTC)
 * Ref 23 doesn't seem to work for me. Spotchecked Times articles, they check out.
 * Odd, it's the right link, just dead. Added an archive url. Harrias  talk 07:55, 26 November 2017 (UTC)

All in all a really nice piece. No dabs, references formatted consistently. Will pass once you get back to me, on hold until then. Lemonade51 (talk) 01:13, 26 November 2017 (UTC) Thanks, responded to each of those. Harrias talk 07:55, 26 November 2017 (UTC)
 * Looks good now, shall pass. Lemonade51 (talk) 16:46, 26 November 2017 (UTC)