Talk:Hits Different/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Unlimitedlead (talk · contribs) 18:33, 15 June 2023 (UTC)

I am pleased to take on this review, "Hits Different" being one of my favorite songs by Taylor. Please bear with me, as I do have a lot on my plate right now. Cheers, Unlimitedlead (talk) 18:33, 15 June 2023 (UTC)
 * I applied to your suggestions, besides rephrasing that one sentence you pointed out, I'm gonna do it later. Bellow I also left some questions to you, it'd be nice to hear the anwsers~! inf sai  ( talkie?  UwU) 10:21, 16 June 2023 (UTC)

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)

(Criteria marked are unassessed)
 * 1) It is reasonably well written.
 * a. (prose, spelling, and grammar):
 * b. (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
 * 1) It is factually accurate and verifiable.
 * a. (reference section):
 * b. (citations to reliable sources):
 * c. (OR):
 * d. (copyvio and plagiarism):
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a. (major aspects):
 * b. (focused):
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a. (images are tagged and non-free content have non-free use rationales):
 * b. (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/fail:
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a. (major aspects):
 * b. (focused):
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a. (images are tagged and non-free content have non-free use rationales):
 * b. (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/fail:
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a. (images are tagged and non-free content have non-free use rationales):
 * b. (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/fail:
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 * Pass/fail:


 * 1989 (Taylor Swift album) and Rolling Stone are linked twice; while the MoS does allow for this in some situations, I think that readers would not need these terms to be linked multiple times, given the brevity of the article.
 * "...with an assistance of...": I suggest changing to "...with the assistance of..."
 * "...drunken display of hertbreak...": Is this a typo or an intentional misspelling?
 * ...the song was compared to her Lover (2019) album cut "Death by a Thousand Cuts": Suggest changing to "...the song was compared to "Death by a Thousand Cuts" from Swift's 2019 album Lover."
 * Fixed all above. inf sai  ( talkie?  UwU) 10:21, 16 June 2023 (UTC)


 * "...and emphasizes her powerlessness in contacts with friends, since she is being left out from appointments since she talks too much about her situation": Can you rephrase this?


 * "During the "tragic" bridge...": Scare quotes? Is there someone we can attribute "tragic" to?
 * I used to think that when critics calls a song a certain way, then it should be put in quotation marks. inf sai  ( talkie?  UwU) 10:21, 16 June 2023 (UTC)


 * " Callie Ahlgrim of Buisness Insider likened a quote from this portion of the song "Dreams of your hair and your stare and sense of belief in the good in the world", to Evermore album tracks...": Dashes should be placed around the lyrics.
 * "...both of them contains references...": Change to "...both of them contain references..."
 * Fixed these two. inf sai  ( talkie?  UwU) 10:21, 16 June 2023 (UTC)


 * "...sold under moniker Lavender Edition in other countries...": Then what was it called in the US?
 * It was a Target exclusive :v All sourced refer to it this way.


 * "...plus it's got one of my [favorite] bridges": This is a trivial matter, but this quotation does not reflect the primary source accurately. It should say "...plus it's got one of my fav[orite] bridges", or something to that end.
 * It was originally this way, but someone changed it. inf sai  ( talkie?  UwU) 10:21, 16 June 2023 (UTC)


 * All notes need citations.
 * Even those from the Credits section? Like, there is an info at the begininning of that section from where I got that info, and it doesn't even need to be sourced per WP:PERSONNEL. inf sai  ( talkie?  UwU) 10:21, 16 June 2023 (UTC)
 * Just a precaution. I will pass this GA review at this time. Unlimitedlead (talk) 12:14, 16 June 2023 (UTC)