Talk:Holes in My Shoes

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I am the author of this article. It's my first wiki page. Evidently there are issues with it. Can anyone help me take care of these? Link articles?

What is his invention that indirectly shortened WW II? Re classification, people of WW II should not be in the main WW II category; and People of the Manhattan Project seems the right classification to me. Posts on the talk page should be signed with four tithes as it says at the top when you are editing it. Hugo999 (talk) 11:53, 18 May 2010 (UTC)

Hello. Good job on your first Wiki page! I am not that experienced but I learned a lot after writing a few pages. I saw this documentary I can help with some of the changes. The first thing you should do is follow the structure used in similar wikipedia pages. It seems like you are trying to promote the documentary and write a bio in the same article. They should really be (2) separate entities that can link to each other. I have made some minor changes. I will post some of the other changes that could be made on here for discussion. Thanks again.Riwo (talk) 14:16, 6 July 2010 (UTC)