Talk:Holiday (Madonna song)/GA1

GA Review
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GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria


 * 1) Is it reasonably well written?
 * A. Prose quality:
 * Cleaned quite a bit. Please see if I missed anything.
 * B. MoS compliance:
 * Removed.
 * 1) Is it factually accurate and verifiable?
 * A. References to sources:
 * B. Citation of reliable sources where necessary:
 * You meant #68. Well couldnot find any other RS hence removed.
 * C. No original research:
 * The authorname was present at the end, placed it at the beginning.
 * 1) Is it broad in its coverage?
 * A. Major aspects:
 * B. Focused:
 * I reduced as much as I could. However for some places it is really necessary to describe the attire, like the ponytail hair or the cone bra. These kind of attires from the live performance became an image and representation of Madonna. I have briefed it as much as I could.
 * 1) Is it neutral?
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * I couldnot find any negative info.
 * 1) Is it stable?
 * No edit wars, etc:
 * 1) Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
 * A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:
 * Done.
 * B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass or Fail:
 * Adressed. --Legolas  ( talk 2 me ) 05:53, 21 August 2009 (UTC)
 * No edit wars, etc:
 * 1) Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
 * A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:
 * Done.
 * B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass or Fail:
 * Adressed. --Legolas  ( talk 2 me ) 05:53, 21 August 2009 (UTC)
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass or Fail:
 * Adressed. --Legolas  ( talk 2 me ) 05:53, 21 August 2009 (UTC)
 * Adressed. --Legolas  ( talk 2 me ) 05:53, 21 August 2009 (UTC)

Prose comments:
 * ""Holiday" is the song by American" THE song?
 * "while talking about universal sentiment" THE universal sentiment.
 * "one of the most live-performed songs by Madonna" awkward.
 * "It appeared in most of her tours including the second leg of her 2008-09 Sticky & Sweet Tour." It HAS appeared.  2008–2009.  Why mention Sticky Sweet Tour?  Is that one more notable than the rest (in relation to this song)?
 * "green signalled" I think you mean green-lit. Signaled is spelled wrong anyways.
 * "It was Jellybean" refer to people by their last names, in most cases, not their nicknames.
 * The Background section has alot of short abrupt sentences. Try and combine a few of them.
 * The background section covers alot, but it's one big paragraph. Break it up a bit.
 * "I was designed by Jean-Paul Gaultier." IT Drewcifer (talk) 12:17, 20 August 2009 (UTC)