Talk:Hollaback Girl/GA2

GA Review
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Reviewer: LOVI33 (talk · contribs) 03:00, 21 June 2020 (UTC)

Looks good from first glance. Might take me a while to review it but will try as fast as possible. LOVI 33  03:00, 21 June 2020 (UTC)

Infobox and lead

 * Target 12-inch to Twelve-inch single
 * Target Right Track Recording to MSR Studios
 * Target 1980s to 1980s in music
 * The song was written by Stefani, Pharrell Williams and Chad Hugo → The song was written by Stefani, Pharrell Williams and Chad Hugo, with the latter two handling the production as 	The Neptunes.
 * Release date in lead does not match release date in infobox
 * 48th Grammy Awards → 48th Annual Grammy Awards
 * Done all. User:Thatone weird wikier  &#124;  Conversations  and  Contributions  05:28, 21 June 2020 (UTC)

Writing and inspiration

 * Looks Good! Amazing writing.

Composition and musical style

 * Move ref 10 to the end of the sentence
 * It is in verse-chorus form with → The song is in verse-chorus form
 * Move ref 13 to the end of the sentence
 * Done all. User:Thatone weird wikier  &#124;  Conversations  and  Contributions  05:29, 21 June 2020 (UTC)

Critical reception

 * Target music critics to Music journalism
 * Eric Greenwood of Drawer B called the song "moronic and embarrassingly tuneless. I'd quote the lyrics → Eric Greenwood of Drawer B called the song "moronic and embarrassingly tuneless," while also writing "I'd quote the lyrics ...
 * It feels like there are more negative reviews shown then positive, maybe stick to: "Hollaback Girl" received mixed reviews from music critics.
 * Done all. User:Thatone weird wikier  &#124;  Conversations  and  Contributions  05:31, 21 June 2020 (UTC)

Commercial performance

 * Wikilink 50 Cent and Olivia
 * It replaced 50 Cent's "Candy Shop" featuring Olivia, which had spent the previous nine weeks at number one on the chart. It maintained the number-one position for four consecutive weeks → It ended the nine-week run of 50 Cent's "Candy Shop" featuring Olivia, and maintained the number-one position for four consecutive weeks.
 * Target We Belong Together to We Belong Together
 * "Hollaback Girl" ranked second on the 2005 Hot 100 year-end chart, beaten by Mariah Carey's "We Belong Together" → "Hollaback Girl" ranked second on the 2005 Hot 100 year-end chart, being kept from the top spot by Mariah Carey's "We Belong Together"
 * Unsure what feat means in maintained this feat, maybe change to record
 * Move ref 36 to end of sentence
 * Target crossover to Crossover music
 * 1.2 million downloads;[38][39] it was certified → 1.2 million downloads.[38][39] It was certified
 * It was certified five-times platinum by the Recording Industry Association of America.[40] It was later re-certified platinum, for the same sales, due to the change of the RIAA certification criteria for singles.[41][a] → It was certified five-times platinum by the Recording Industry Association of America and was later re-certified platinum, for the same sales, due to the change of the RIAA certification criteria for singles.[40][41][a]
 * On the year-end list for Hot Digital Songs in 2005, "Hollaback Girl" placed at the top of the chart. → On the year-end list for Hot Digital Songs in 2005, "Hollaback Girl" topped the chart.
 * Done all. User:Thatone weird wikier  &#124;  Conversations  and  Contributions  05:37, 21 June 2020 (UTC)

Music video

 * The video opens with a scene of Stefani → It opens with a scene of Stefani
 * released commercially through CD singles and digital downloads, and some → released commercially through CD singles and digital downloads. Some
 * move ref 57 to the end of the sentence
 * Done all. User:Thatone weird wikier  &#124;  Conversations  and  Contributions  05:38, 21 June 2020 (UTC)

Live performances

 * Looks Good! No issues found

Track listings

 * Looks Good!

Remixes

 * Looks Good!

Credits and personnel

 * Change title to 'Personnel', 'Credits and personnel' is used when recording locations or publishing is also included
 * Done. User:Thatone weird wikier  &#124;  Conversations  and  Contributions  05:38, 21 June 2020 (UTC)

Charts

 * Looks Good!

Certifications

 * Looks Good!

Notes/See Also

 * Move Notes to below See also in accordance with MOS:FNNR
 * Done. User:Thatone weird wikier  &#124;  Conversations  and  Contributions  05:40, 21 June 2020 (UTC)

Final comments and verdict

 * for now. Overall this definitely passes the GA criteria, there are just some issues I have found that, if addressed, will definitely improve it's GA criteria. If addressed, I will pass it. LOVI  33  03:59, 21 June 2020 (UTC)
 * I have finished addressing your comments. User:Thatone weird wikier  &#124;  Conversations  and  Contributions  05:40, 21 June 2020 (UTC)
 * , thats great! I will pass it now. LOVI  33  13:28, 21 June 2020 (UTC)