Talk:Holland Village MRT station/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Gerald Waldo Luis (talk · contribs) 09:43, 4 January 2021 (UTC)

I noticed this quickly on the GAN since I frequently travel from this station during my holidays here. Will be great to see this getting that circle, so I'll review it.  Gerald WL  09:43, 4 January 2021 (UTC)

Infobox

 * Caption reads "Exit A of Holland Village MRT station". Repetitive: consider changing it to "Exit A of the station".  Gerald WL  09:43, 4 January 2021 (UTC)
 * Suggest changing map caption to "Location of the station within Singapore", or anything similar.  Gerald WL  09:43, 4 January 2021 (UTC)
 * Suggest changing map caption to "Location of the station within Singapore", or anything similar.  Gerald WL  09:43, 4 January 2021 (UTC)

History

 * The lead and the body are like a mother and a fetus. They are connected, but not chained. Thus, all abbreviations explained in the lead must be re-explained back (i.e. "CCL" to "Circle line (CCL)).  Gerald WL  09:43, 4 January 2021 (UTC)
 * I suggest linking Boring (earth) within "bored", as many may confuse it with boredom.  Gerald WL  09:43, 4 January 2021 (UTC)
 * "The station opened on 8 October 2011 as part of the CCL extension to HarbourFront station." First, suggest linking HarbourFront MRT station. Second, that's a whole lot of refs there.  Gerald WL  09:43, 4 January 2021 (UTC)
 * ✅ Removed one ref.
 * Link Land Transport Authority?  Gerald WL  09:43, 4 January 2021 (UTC)
 * ✅ Removed one ref.
 * Link Land Transport Authority?  Gerald WL  09:43, 4 January 2021 (UTC)

Station details

 * Is this the Hugh Holland referred to?  Gerald WL  09:43, 4 January 2021 (UTC)
 * In the subsection's case, it would be better to put the station names in quotations, as they are options in a poll.  Gerald WL  09:43, 4 January 2021 (UTC)
 * Link Anglo-Chinese School (International) Singapore?  Gerald WL  09:43, 4 January 2021 (UTC)
 * "The station serves the Circle line"-- if you apply my point on History, "Circle line" would just have to be abbreviated, as it's already explained.  Gerald WL  09:43, 4 January 2021 (UTC)
 * Link Anglo-Chinese School (International) Singapore?  Gerald WL  09:43, 4 January 2021 (UTC)
 * "The station serves the Circle line"-- if you apply my point on History, "Circle line" would just have to be abbreviated, as it's already explained.  Gerald WL  09:43, 4 January 2021 (UTC)
 * "The station serves the Circle line"-- if you apply my point on History, "Circle line" would just have to be abbreviated, as it's already explained.  Gerald WL  09:43, 4 January 2021 (UTC)

I did one edit by myself per WP:SOFIXIT. In addition to the issues above, the references also aren't layouted well (i.e. the Website parameter doesn't display the correct name well). I am unable to do these per restricted time on WP, so if you can do it, please do so.  Gerald WL  09:43, 4 January 2021 (UTC)
 * , do you mind addressing my concerns here?  Gerald WL  14:44, 8 January 2021 (UTC)


 * Oh sorry, I didnt realise you made a review. I thought you only started reviewing. Sorry, was a bit busy. Yeah will look through.--ZKang123 (talk) 23:31, 8 January 2021 (UTC)
 * , sorry for the long wait! Will elect this as GA-- can you add alt texts on the images as a finishing?  Gerald WL  06:29, 11 January 2021 (UTC)
 * What are alt text? Arent captions enough?--ZKang123 (talk) 06:31, 11 January 2021 (UTC)
 * , see WP:ALTTEXT. They're texts that screen readers use to help the blind understand what's conveyed. You don't need to get specific-- for example if there's a chocolate-color bottle, just write "A bottle of chocolate color at a table."  Gerald WL  06:39, 11 January 2021 (UTC)

Ok I added " |alt=refer to caption "--ZKang123 (talk) 06:45, 11 January 2021 (UTC)
 * , putting this to GA now. See you've added some MRT articles as GAN; I'll probably review it when I have time. For now I'm focusing on updating Sriwijaya Air Flight 182. Hang in there!  Gerald WL  06:49, 11 January 2021 (UTC)
 * Thanks very much for this review!--ZKang123 (talk) 06:51, 11 January 2021 (UTC)