Talk:Holly Wilson

Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment
This article was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment, between 6 January 2020 and 13 March 2020. Further details are available on the course page. Student editor(s): Yelly1. Peer reviewers: Gbarajas.

Above undated message substituted from Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org assignment by PrimeBOT (talk) 22:31, 17 January 2022 (UTC)

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I have some notes for you: The biography is easy to understand and gives a good idea about your artist. The education area is also well informed and the structure is clear and well organized. However, the artwork section is a bit empty. You should add more information to the parts you left blank and I would also recommend you lay out the information in paragraph form rather than just listing the information. Some other changes I would make are simple punctuation mistakes, like watch where you place periods and citations. The coverage of each heading is a bit unbalanced and should be fixed so that there is equal information in each section, but again that could be fixed by simply adding more information. Another thing I would suggest changing is your reference section, it looks manually typed in but if you cite within wikipedia it should automatically be added, if you need more guidance check out the training on citations. Besides that, you have done a good job researching your artist as you have a lot of citations and the content is neutral and you dont rely on one source for many of your statements. Overall, most important change is adding more information to your article. Something I liked that you did was how you used your "see also" section. I think that's a good idea and will incorporate that into my article. Good work! Gbarajas (talk) 05:05, 21 February 2020 (UTC) Gbarajas (giovanna barajas)