Talk:Hollyhock Retreat/Archive 1

I find it objectionable the mention of CEO Dana Bass and her husband Joel solomon of Renewal Partners. This is a commercial Promotion to inhance Renewal Partners investment objectives In my opinion.

I could add some factual information to "Hollyhock Retreat" like a memorial to "Sue Saunders" who worked at Hollyhock Retreat for 25 years and died in POVERTY. I think Wikipedia is not a forum for deceitful commercial promotions. I've tried to keep the edit clean and simple.

I suggest you read what is not vandalism. —Preceding unsigned comment added by 207.102.153.51 (talk)


 * Thank you for explaining your multiple deletions of the same content. It is much more useful to have this discussion and understand why you were taking those editing actions so that we can reach consensus about what is and is not appropriate for inclusion in the article.  I do not find it to be promotional to list the executive management of an organization in an article about the organization.  In fact, that is common practice on Wikipedia.  If you have additional information to add regarding Hollyhock that comes from reliable sources, then by all means please do add it.   The article currently does not have much information, and any additional information to expand it that comes from reliable sources would be a most welcome addition.  ConcernedVancouverite (talk) 18:07, 8 March 2010 (UTC)


 * It appears that you have again continued to make the same deletions. I do not want to engage in an edit war, so I will post the content that you have repeatedly deleted here so that consensus can be reached about the appropriateness of inclusion.  The statements that have been deleted are, "The CEO is Dana Bass Solomon," and "and the current volunteer president is her husband, Joel Solomon. Mr. Solomon is president of Renewal Partners which was a financial backer of Happy Planet Foods, Inhance Investment Management, and Capers Markets."  If you can explain how you feel that listing the executive management of an organization is "deceitful commercial promotion" it would be helpful to understand your point of view. ConcernedVancouverite (talk) 18:19, 8 March 2010 (UTC)


 * Thank you for your quick third opinion, TransporterMan. I can accept your proposed solution. Thank you for your time. ConcernedVancouverite (talk) 21:39, 8 March 2010 (UTC)

Thank you for your opinion TransporterMan.

I can agree with Delete the sentence which reads, "Mr. Solomon is president of Renewal Partners which was a financial backer of Happy Planet Foods, Inhance Investment Management, and Capers Markets."

It appears ConcernedVancouverite is willing to as well. Thanks for your time. —Preceding unsigned comment added by 207.102.153.107 (talk) 23:44, 8 March 2010 (UTC)