Talk:Holmdel Township, New Jersey

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Pictures
I noticed a bit of overuse/misuse of pictures in the article. In particular the infobox should be concise so having multiple pictures is not usually useful especially if the reader has to scroll over them to get to the information; I dropped all but one picture and one map. I did add some of the pictures to the gallery at the points of interest section and one of the maps to the geography section. Pictures should also be relevant to the section of the article they are in. I have fond memories of Holmdel park and a picture of it in the Parks and recreation section is relevant; however, I'm not sure why another shows up in the Demographics section. Also why two pictures of the Horn telescope; I dropped one. The gallery is perhaps overlong and if the history section was expanded (e.g., add info on the Lenape in the area, when did the first Europeans show up, how and when did it become separate from Raritan/Middletown), some of the historical pictures could be moved there. Erp (talk) 16:16, 14 January 2024 (UTC)