Talk:Holy Names Hawks

Edits
Since my valid WP:MOS-supported edits keep being reverted, I will explain them in detail here. If you agree witht hem, discuss them here before reverting, and please provide references to appropriate Wikipedia policies.

Ground Zero &#124; t 12:42, 8 September 2015 (UTC)
 * 1) The article is about the Hawks, not HNU Athletics, so the lead sentence should explain what the Hawks are.
 * 2) "In 1994 Holy Names University, then Holy Names College, elevated its club sports to...." A univeristy is an "it", not a "they".
 * 3) "The University is currently in the third year..." - changed to "The university is in the third year..." because of WP:INSTUTITION and because the presente tense indicates the current condition -- "currently" adds no meaning here.
 * 4) "Varsity Sports" heading changed to "Varsity sports" per WP:HEAD