Talk:Holy Spirit Church (Sajópálfala)

Discussion during review at Articles for Creation
I'm inclined to think that this topic merits an article on Wikipedia, but I haven't yet gone through the sources to satisfy myself on that point. In the meantime, I have a few comments:
 * I'm not seeing why we need to list Mariapocs as a "See also" article. But even if there is a good reason for this, we still don't need the external link to the city's website page for the church there.  That link would be better placed in the article on Mariapocs, not here.
 * We really don't need all of those section headings. Having so many headings, each one containing only two or three sentences, just makes the article look incomplete.  The article will be viewed more favorably by other reviewers if the section heading were removed.
 * Footnote #4 (to mariaut.hu) goes to a landing page that doesn't seem to support the material in the article. Was there a more specific page at that site that you are using as a resource?  If so, the link should go directly to that sub-page.

I'll try to take another look at the draft later this week. If you have any questions, feel free to ask. NewYorkActuary (talk) 13:53, 29 March 2017 (UTC)