Talk:Homansbyen Depot/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Arsenikk (talk)  13:05, 28 December 2010 (UTC)


 * Words like "forge" and "depot" need to be wikilinked (done)
 * In English, buildings are not drawn, but designed (fixed)
 * As the article is called "Homansbyen Depot", I've changed many instances of "Kristiania Sporveisanlæg" to that
 * In the first paragraph of "facilities", all the sentences start with "the". Try varying a bit more.
 * Stick in commas (not spaces) to separate thousands (e.g. 12,000)
 * Links should only be linked once, unless very far from each other (i.e. much longer articles than this)
 * Try to avoid very short paragraphs. Single-sentence paragraphs are never acceptable, and preferably they should be at least four sentences or so.

I've fixed everything I came across, so I'm granting a "good article" status. Congratulations! Arsenikk (talk)  13:05, 28 December 2010 (UTC)
 * Thanks! -- Eisfbnore  talk 14:44, 29 December 2010 (UTC)