Talk:Home Counties Brigade

Rating
I have assessed this article for the Military History project and believe it to be a Start class article. I believe that it does not meet B class criteria 1, 3 and 5. I believe that it could be improved by addressing the following:


 * Referencing: the referencing of this article could be improved by including a separate Notes and References section, with in-line citations for each paragraph and a list of sources used. At the moment, not every paragraph has a citation;
 * Structure: the structure of the article could be improved by breaking it up into sections, including an expanded lead or introductory section. A possible structure might be: Introduction, History, Order of Battle, Commanding Officers (if applicable), Notes, References, See also, External links;
 * Supporting materials: the article could be improved by the addition of an infobox or some pictures to illustrate it.

Just a few ideas. If you would like more in-depth comments, please consider adding this article to the discussion on WP:MHPR. Also, if you would like to seek re-assessment in the future, please go to WP:MHA. These comments are by no means meant to be a criticism of the work already undertaken, they are intended to provide some advice on how the article might be developed. Hope this helps. AustralianRupert (talk) 04:21, 22 April 2009 (UTC)