Talk:Home Made Mince Pie/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Jaguar (talk · contribs) 17:15, 13 June 2015 (UTC)

I have to get these all out of the way... JAG UAR   17:15, 13 June 2015 (UTC Disambiguations: No links found.

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Checking against the GA criteria

 * GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)


 * 1) It is reasonably well written.
 * a (prose, no copyvios, spelling and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
 * I would recommend splitting the lead into two paragraphs to make the lead more balanced, per WP:LEAD
 * Nothing on the Production in the lead, despite the section being scarce the lead must summarise, even if it's minor
 * The plot summary in the lead is quite extensive
 * "The focus of the humor is in a mince pie that brandy is added to in an attempt to make it more appreciable" - this doesn't make any sense, focus of the film maybe?
 * "Reviewers mentioned that the film was too long" - but the length of the film (apart a measurement) isn't in the article
 * 1) It is factually accurate and verifiable.
 * a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR):
 * The assertions regarding the cameramen could be original research, but both candidates are included in the reference given.
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a (major aspects): b (focused):
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * Pass/Fail:

This is another good one. Well researched and well written. Nothing major so it can be put on hold. This film sounds hilarious too! JAG UAR   20:56, 13 June 2015 (UTC)