Talk:Homer's Night Out/GA1

GA Review
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Hi, I will be reviewing your article, Homer's Night Out. It looks very good. There is a typo that I'll just fix myself. I will be posting further comments here.Please feel free to contact me. &mdash; Mattisse (Talk) 20:48, 15 September 2008 (UTC)
 * "Bart wanders into the room" - this is another room than the restaurant, I take it, a party room of some sort? This part is a little vague for someone unfamiliar with the episode.
 * Since you describe the costumes of the "showgirls" under Production (and have a still of a costume), it would be better if you described their presence in the plot more clearly.
 * Otherwise, the article seems to fulfill the criteria for GA. I will give a full review when you respond. &mdash; Mattisse (Talk) 21:10, 15 September 2008 (UTC)
 * Thanks! I have made some edits now, let me know what you think! =) The Le ft  orium  06:33, 16 September 2008 (UTC)


 * Per MOS:LINK, autoformatting of dates is now depreciated so I delinked them. &mdash; Mattisse  (Talk) 15:39, 16 September 2008 (UTC)


 *  Fineal GA review (see here for criteria)


 * 1) It is reasonably well written.
 * a (prose): b (MoS):
 * 1) It is factually accurate and verifiable.
 * a (references): b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR):
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a (major aspects): b (focused):
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * I am pleased to pass this article for GA. &mdash; Mattisse  (Talk) 15:42, 16 September 2008 (UTC)
 * 1) It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * I am pleased to pass this article for GA. &mdash; Mattisse  (Talk) 15:42, 16 September 2008 (UTC)
 * I am pleased to pass this article for GA. &mdash; Mattisse  (Talk) 15:42, 16 September 2008 (UTC)
 * I am pleased to pass this article for GA. &mdash; Mattisse  (Talk) 15:42, 16 September 2008 (UTC)


 * Awesome, thanks! BTW, I noticed that in the ratings paragraph the date says "19-25 March March 1990", shouldn't it be "19-25 March 1990"? The Le ft  orium  15:47, 16 September 2008 (UTC)
 * Yes. Sometimes the script screws up. I check it visually but don't always catch everything. It needs to be corrected. &mdash; Mattisse  (Talk) 16:02, 16 September 2008 (UTC)