Talk:Homer Simpson in: "Kidney Trouble"/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer:  R uby2010   comment!  15:23, 19 July 2011 (UTC)


 * GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)


 * 1) It is reasonably well written.
 * a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
 * 1) It is factually accurate and verifiable.
 * a (references): b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR):
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a (major aspects): b (focused):
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:

Comments

 * "In reality, Grampa's bladder- not kidneys- would have ruptured from "holding it in"." Does a character say this in the episode, or it the writer's own tangent? Not sure if it belongs here
 * Remember sentences with quotes need to end with citations
 * Make sure there's consistent date formatting (i.e. ref 6 compared to 7)

I made a few minor tweaks myself, and am placing the review on hold for seven days. Thanks,  R uby2010   comment!  16:12, 19 July 2011 (UTC)
 * All done! Thanks for the review! :) Queenieacoustic (talk) 17:34, 19 July 2011 (UTC)
 * Pass for GA. Nice work!  R uby2010   comment!  18:31, 19 July 2011 (UTC)