Talk:Homesick (Dua Lipa song)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: The Ultimate Boss (talk · contribs) 16:33, 4 August 2020 (UTC)

It will be exciting to review one of your articles again! The Ultimate Boss (talk) 16:33, 4 August 2020 (UTC)

Infobox and lead

 * It says it's the seventh single on the lead, but the eighth on the Dua Lipa album. Which one is it?
 * Thats my mistake, thanks for checking that. The song "New Love" was being discussed as a promotional single or single and I forgot to update it once the discussion was closed. Its the eighth. LOVI  33  15:03, 10 August 2020 (UTC)


 * "The song was released by Warner Bros. Records as a digital single on 1 December 2017," → The song was released for digital download and streaming through Warner Bros. Records on 1 December 2017,"
 * , Digital single ≠ digital download/streaming, it was released after the release of its parent album. LOVI  33  15:03, 10 August 2020 (UTC)

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 * "it was serviced to" → "it was sent to"
 * "with lyrics discussing being away from loved ones." → "with its lyrics addressing being away from loved ones."
 * "but many also feeling as though it was forced." → "but also feeling it was forced."

Writing and production
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 * "everything and wanting" → "everything, and wanting"
 * "and she found it" → "and found it"
 * "They began recording everything, humming and making up melodies." → "They began recording the song, humming and making up melodies."
 * "as she though it" → "as she thought it"

Music and lyrics

 * Looks good!

Release and promotion
, per above. LOVI 33  15:05, 10 August 2020 (UTC)
 * "The song was later released as a digital single on 1 December 2017," → "The song was later released for digital download and streaming through Warner Bros. Records on 1 December 2017,"

Reception
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 * "labelled the song "delicate"" → "labelled the song as "delicate""
 * "Homesick" "raw," and "ready to tug at the heartstrings." → "Homesick" as a "raw," and "ready to tug at the heartstrings." track."

Track listings

 * Looks good!

Credits and personnel

 * Looks all good!

Charts

 * Looks good!

Certifications

 * Looks good!

Release history

 * Looks good!

Final comments and verdict
I am putting this until the issues are fixed. Great job on this article! The Ultimate Boss (talk) 23:47, 9 August 2020 (UTC)
 * , thanks for reviewing this article! I have addressed all your comments above, is there anything else I can do? LOVI  33  15:10, 10 August 2020 (UTC)
 * , Everything looks great! I am going to ✅ this! The Ultimate Boss (talk) 06:26, 12 August 2020 (UTC)