Talk:Homo antecessor/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Some Dude From North Carolina (talk · contribs) 00:49, 27 July 2021 (UTC)


 * Add WP:ALT text to every image.
 * unnecessary in this case because the alt would read exactly like the captions  User:Dunkleosteus77 &#124;push to talk 03:52, 28 July 2021 (UTC)


 * "cheek bone" should be written as one word.
 * done


 * Add a hyphen between "best preserved".
 * done  User:Dunkleosteus77 &#124;push to talk 03:52, 28 July 2021 (UTC)


 * Add hyphens between "25 year old", "million year old", and "11.5 year old".
 * I don't like hyphens being used like that, my brain gets confused  User:Dunkleosteus77 &#124;push to talk 03:52, 28 July 2021 (UTC)


 * Try removing the overuse of the word "like".
 * because anatomy is hard to grasp, diversifying the vocabulary may make it more confusing  User:Dunkleosteus77 &#124;push to talk 17:23, 28 July 2021 (UTC)


 * "presumably to access to the" "presumably to access the"
 * done  User:Dunkleosteus77 &#124;push to talk 17:23, 28 July 2021 (UTC)


 * Add a comma after "Similarly".
 * done  User:Dunkleosteus77 &#124;push to talk 17:23, 28 July 2021 (UTC)


 * Ping when done. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 19:50, 27 July 2021 (UTC)
 *  User:Dunkleosteus77 &#124;push to talk 19:22, 28 July 2021 (UTC)