Talk:Hong Kong at the 2010 Winter Olympics/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Nova Crystallis (talk · contribs) 14:45, 28 May 2018 (UTC)

Reviewing later. Nova Crystallis  (Talk)  14:45, 28 May 2018 (UTC)


 * I don't think Han needs 2 1/2 links to her name in an article that could be completely read without scrolling.
 * I think you know where the 1/2 link is...
 * CUt it down to 2, one prose, one body. Courcelles (talk) 21:24, 2 June 2018 (UTC)


 * Mention they didn't win any medals in the Winter Olympics in the background?
 * Since the events don't use commas for the length (for example, 1000 m), you probably shouldn't use it for the prose.
 * "On 20 February, she participated in the 1,500 metres event, in heat two, she came in last with a time of 2 minutes and 35 seconds, which placed her 32nd for the event." Split this sentence.

That's it. Nova Crystallis  (Talk)  21:18, 2 June 2018 (UTC)
 * Taken care of everything except the commas, I don't know WHY the article titles don't use commas, but most varities of English use some sort of divider for four digit numbers, mine included. Courcelles (talk) 21:23, 2 June 2018 (UTC)