Talk:Honiara/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Pleasant1623 (talk · contribs) 13:42, 13 August 2013 (UTC)

Will post comments tomorrow. Regards, Plea$ant 1623  ✉  13:42, 13 August 2013 (UTC)


 * Sorry for the delay, posting comments:


 * Lead
 * "Conditions became so bad in Honiara that in July 2003 Australian military and police units moved into the country to restore order" --> "Conditions became so bad in Honiara that in July 2003 the Australian military and police units moved into the country to restore order."
 * Done


 * "... destroying part of Chinatown and displacing more than 1,000 Chinese residents" --> "destroying a part of Chinatown and making more than 1,000 Chinese residents homeless"
 * Done


 * "The commercial heart of Honiara was virtually reduced to rubble and ashes, devastating the town. As a result tourism in the city and islands has been severely affected." --> "The town eventually got devastated due to the riots and also severely affected the tourism in the city and the islands."
 * Done


 * Modern development
 * Link leprosy
 * Linked


 * Economy
 * "Honiara has a harbour from which ferries depart to the various other parts of the Solomon Islands." - Citation needed
 * Slightly changed the sentence and fixed a reference


 * Schools
 * "In 1979, following independence in 1978 from British rule" --> "In 1979, following independence in 1978 from the British rule"
 * Done


 * "Since 2007, the management has started an ambitious programme of enhancing the building and other infrastructure facilities of the school..." --> "Since 2007, the management has started a programme of enhancing the building and other infrastructure facilities of the school..."
 * Done


 * Hotels and restaurants
 * "... which replaced the former hotel which was gutted during the 2006 riots". Which hotel? The King Solomon Hotel?
 * Done


 * Culture
 * "... and are copied from the 'You Got Served', 'Step Up 1 and 2' and 'Stomp the Yard'". You're talking about the movies, right? If yes, then please link all three.
 * Done


 * Weird, in one sentence harbor is written in British and in another one American. Please change any one of them for the sake of uniformity.
 * Done

When these comments are addressed, I will pass the article. Regards, Plea$ant 1623  ✉  15:18, 15 August 2013 (UTC)
 * Plea$ant 1623, thanks for the review. Dr. Blofeld and myself have collaborated on most articles including this one. Hope all issues raised by you are addressed.-- Nvvchar . 18:17, 15 August 2013 (UTC)

Final analysis
GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria


 * 1) Is it reasonably well written?
 * A. Prose quality:
 * B. MoS compliance:
 * 1) Is it factually accurate and verifiable?
 * A. References to sources:
 * B. Citation of reliable sources where necessary:
 * C. No original research:
 * 1) Is it broad in its coverage?
 * A. Major aspects:
 * B. Focused:
 * 1) Is it neutral?
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) Is it stable?
 * No edit wars, etc:
 * 1) Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
 * A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:
 * B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass or Fail:

Good job, passing the article. Thanks, Plea$ant 1623  ✉  14:18, 17 August 2013 (UTC)

Thanks for the review!♦ Dr. Blofeld  15:30, 17 August 2013 (UTC)

Thanks, Pleasant1623.-- Nvvchar . 17:48, 17 August 2013 (UTC)