Talk:Hookers for Jesus

Suggesting article rewrite
I noticed that a lot of Cindamuse's edits have been copy-and-pasted from Hookers for Jesus' website:

"The vision of the organization includes promoting spiritual, emotional, and physical wellness in the lives of those who have been affected by sexual trauma and related forms of abuse in the adult entertainment industry."

is copy-and-pasted from here: http://www.hookersforjesus.net/programs.cfm

I suggest this article undergo some serious rewriting. There's not only POV problems, there's also issues with US-centrism "interviewed in major news publications across the nation and throughout the world" and in general the article reads like someone who feels very strongly on this topic decided just to copy and paste to promote the organization.

The prose is coming out pretty damn purple and I think Wikipedia can do better. Muncadunc (talk) 16:12, 28 March 2009 (UTC)