Talk:Hope Forest shooting

oops - missed one ?
All the changes in this edit, with the edit comment of "oops - missed one", make no sense. I suspect an edit conflict rather than an intentional rollback of my edits (see article history for details, reasons), but please advise. Mitch Ames (talk) 07:30, 25 June 2023 (UTC)
 * I missed one instance of "sister" after changing the other to "sister in law" as per the Age ref. I have just looked at the Guardian ref, which has Bartholomew's sister in law. The Guardian also has her waking up screaming which I removed, thinking it dubious and unknowable. Doug butler (talk) 07:39, 25 June 2023 (UTC)
 * It was all the other changes that were the problem - I've re-applied them. Mitch Ames (talk) 09:16, 25 June 2023 (UTC)