Talk:Horace Moore-Jones/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: CPA-5 (talk · contribs) 20:18, 8 September 2019 (UTC)

I claim this one. After I finish USS Takanis Bay and German torpedo boat T35 I will do this one. Probably within a couple of days I will start this one. Cheers. CPA-5 (talk) 20:18, 8 September 2019 (UTC)


 * Born in Malvern Wells, Worcestershire, England Link Worcestershire.
 * Done. Zawed (talk) 09:17, 12 September 2019 (UTC)


 * and a school teacher, Sarah Ann Garner No née?
 * Done. Zawed (talk) 09:17, 12 September 2019 (UTC)


 * a relationship with Dobson and the two married Dobson who?
 * It was Anne Dobson introduced in the previous paragraph. I have moved the content around to make the connection stronger. Zawed (talk) 09:17, 12 September 2019 (UTC)


 * careers as artists, settling in Sydney Unlink Sydney.
 * Dobson, who had trained for a time at the Royal Academy in London Unlink London.
 * with the Art Society of New South Wales Link New South Wales.
 * Done. Zawed (talk) 09:17, 12 September 2019 (UTC)


 * remarried in 1905, to Florence Mitchell No néé?
 * Done. Zawed (talk) 09:17, 12 September 2019 (UTC)


 * time of the outbreak of the First World War Link WWI.
 * Done. Zawed (talk) 09:17, 12 September 2019 (UTC)


 * he joined up with the main body of the NZEF in Egypt Pipe Egypt to the Sultanate of Egypt.
 * upon on the plateau where Lieutenant Colonel Arthur Plugge established Lieutenant Colonel needs a hyphen.
 * Done. Zawed (talk) 09:17, 12 September 2019 (UTC)


 * Section, which was attached to Lieutenant General William Birdwood's Same as above with Lieutenant General.
 * Done. Zawed (talk) 09:17, 12 September 2019 (UTC)


 * at Gallipoli, as well as Major General Alexander Godley Same as above with Major General.
 * Done. Zawed (talk) 09:17, 12 September 2019 (UTC)


 * the five-metre high statue, mounted No English units?
 * Added a conversion and rephrased slightly. Zawed (talk) 09:17, 12 September 2019 (UTC)


 * donated by the Turkish government and sourced --> "donated by the Turkish Government and sourced".
 * Done. Zawed (talk) 09:17, 12 September 2019 (UTC)


 * No edit wars.

Infobox
 * Looks good to me.

Sources
 * The "Bronze statue honours war artist" says it was published on 27 March 2015 instead of 28th.
 * Done. Zawed (talk) 09:17, 12 September 2019 (UTC)


 * The rest looks good to me.
 * No ORs.
 * The sources are reliable of high quality.

Images
 * Looks good to me. Cheers. CPA-5 (talk) 12:37, 11 September 2019 (UTC)
 * Thanks for the review. I have actioned all of the above, except some country/city links. It is my preference to not link countries but to link cities. This is s a consequence of feedback of reviewers on past articles I have taken to GA/A-Class. Zawed (talk) 09:17, 12 September 2019 (UTC)
 * I agree you. I only believe you should link a country if it's not a current one but a former one. Cheers. CPA-5 (talk) 20:55, 12 September 2019 (UTC)
 * Anyway I'll pass it. Cheers. CPA-5 (talk) 09:59, 13 September 2019 (UTC)