Talk:Horse racing equipment

Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment
This article was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment, between 1 April 2019 and 5 June 2019. Further details are available on the course page. Peer reviewers: Dmcki002.

Above undated message substituted from Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org assignment by PrimeBOT (talk) 22:36, 17 January 2022 (UTC)

Peer Review of Hitterperez - Horse Racing Artifacts
I really enjoyed the two objects pertaining to horse racing and found that they were incorporated seamlessly. Great use of sources and I enjoyed all of the information provided throughout your artifacts/explanations. The only suggestions I would have would be to edit the minor grammar mistakes made throughout the explanations (ie spacing and commas). I like the journey through horse racing history you take the reader through for both of the pieces, but some feedback I have would be to reread the second artifact because, towards the middle of the description on saddles, it felt as if the information was being listed sentence by sentence instead of being smoothly/nonchalantly told each bit of information. Other than that the objects chosen were great and all of the pictures and sources were good picks, conveying the information you wanted to give to the viewer/reader without boring or giving them too much information. Keep up the good work and good luck with the final project/assignment.

Two disjointed subjects
This is a rather strange article. I highly doubt anyone would search for the term "Horse Racing Artifacts", remember we're here for a reader. It includes two devices which seem to be crow-barred in together. I would suggest two separate articles or at least move the page to a more likely search term like Horse racing equipment. Ifnord (talk) 18:12, 15 July 2019 (UTC)