Talk:Horses in World War I/Archive 2

Horses v machine guns
While reading a journal article about something else entirely (sound ranging), in relation to the Battle of Cambrai (1917):

"The breakthrough was to be exploited by five cavalry divisions that Field Marshal Haig had allocated for that purpose. They failed in part because, as the British Official History, quoting an American, put it: 'You can't make a cavalry charge until you have captured the enemy's last machine gun'."

From "Lawrence Bragg's Role in the Development of Sound-Ranging in World War I", Author(s): William Van der Kloot, Source: Notes and Records of the Royal Society of London, Vol. 59, No. 3 (Sep. 22, 2005), p. 281, Published by: The Royal Society, Stable URL: http://www.jstor.org/stable/30041503

The article attributed the original quote to: Captain Wifried (compiler), ''Military operations in France and Belgium 1917. The battle of Cambrai'' (HMSO, London, 1948). Which I may be able to lay my hands on to see if it actually identifies the "American". David Underdown (talk) 15:05, 1 March 2010 (UTC)
 * David, sorry for the delayed response. I've added a sentence on this to the American section; please let me know if it wasn't what you had in mind! Dana boomer (talk) 00:15, 6 March 2010 (UTC)

I've found the full quote now: "It is by no means certain, however, that there was any place for bodies of horse [i.e. cavalry or other horsed units] on the battlefields of 1917, an eminent American said apropos of a French attempt which failed, 'You can't make a cavalry charge until you have captured the enemy's last machine gun'."

- Captain Wifried (compiler), Military operations in France and Belgium 1917. The battle of Cambrai, Preface, p. iv, [HMSO, London, 1948]. 1991 Imperial War Museum/The Battery Press. ISBN 0898391628

As you can see, unfortunately it's no more specific as to who the American actually was. David Underdown (talk) 13:32, 8 March 2010 (UTC)

Over 100 percent
What does it mean, in the casualties section, that the death rates were 290% of original stocks? The same goes for other figures that go beyond 100%. Kulystab (talk) 22:12, 5 March 2010 (UTC)
 * Basically that the military kept bringing in additional horses, and so by the end of the war, 2.9 times the number of horses they started the war with had been killed. Therefore, 290% of the original stock of horses. Dana boomer (talk) 23:51, 5 March 2010 (UTC)
 * Thanks for the quick response. And another question: does the original stock of horses refer to the stock Britain had in general, or only to the stock that it had in East Africa alone? Kulystab (talk) 00:18, 6 March 2010 (UTC)
 * I believe the number to be based on the stock of horses held by the British military at the beginning of the war. So, not all of the horses in Britain, but not just those in East Africa either. I'll be working on the article more this evening (just got my new ILL book in, yay!), so I'll do some tweaks on this section to make it a bit more readable. Dana boomer (talk) 00:23, 6 March 2010 (UTC)
 * Great. Thanks a lot. I'm now translating this article into the Hebrew Wikipedia, so I might badger you a bit more, if you don't mind. That's a fine aritcle you have here. There was just one thing that felt awkward and that was the information regarding Russia or France under the Central Powers section. I know it comes as a comparison, but still, it feels a bit strange. Also, if you have more information about the use of horses in the Ottoman Empire, it could give a better picture on the battles in the Middle Eastern theater. Kulystab (talk) 00:47, 6 March 2010 (UTC)
 * I will be adding some information on the Ottomans in just a bit - that is what I was waiting on the ILL book for. I'm not sure what you mean by the information on Russia and France in the Central Powers section. The is only one mention of the French (other than the geographical area occupied by the Germans) in the Central Powers section as a subsection of Procurement. If you are meaning the Continental Europe section of the article, this is meant to be a geographical division, not a division by sides. That is why information on France, Russia, Germany and Austro-Hungary is in the same section. Dana boomer (talk) 02:50, 6 March 2010 (UTC)
 * Also, Kulystab, I forgot to say last night that it is great that you are translating the article into the Hebrew WP. I have no problem with being "badgered" - I believe that being translated into another language is one of the best tests that prose can go through! (Most of the Ottomon information has been added, as well, in case you hadn't seen). Dana boomer (talk) 23:44, 6 March 2010 (UTC)


 * Kulystab, feel free to drop me a line if Dana is busy; she's the one with all the books on Horses in WWI, but I did a lot of the wordsmithing and am the one who's the history geek, so if there is a question about meaning, I can probably pitch in some too...  Montanabw (talk) 03:21, 7 March 2010 (UTC)

Peer Review comments

 * Hi, responding to peer review request. It was the percentages that stopped me in my tracks too. Not sure how best to distribute the rest of my points so will leave them all here. Copy this to the peer review page if you feel it is appropriate.
 * Though the percentage figures become clear when explained in the talk page, I feel that a little more explanation in the article would resolve doubt. A less confusing option, if the figures are available, might be to give the casualties as a proportion of *all* horses involved in a conflict, then give the number originally sent as a proportion of the total horses, making it clear that extras were sent due to the attrition.
 * I added a note into the text to hopefully make the statistics more understandable. I don't have the figures that you propose to use (wish I did), and I don't want to mess with the source's numbers too much and risk the claim of original research. Dana boomer (talk) 02:21, 9 March 2010 (UTC)


 * Personally, I like the pre-contents-box para to be more concise, offering a guide to navigating the article, and let the sections talk for themselves, maybe each with an introductory sentence.
 * Unfortunately, wiki MOS wants the lead to be a summary of the article, if it's too short, we'll get spanked for not being a true summary. Damned if we do or don't. :-P  Montanabw (talk) 00:01, 9 March 2010 (UTC)
 * Montana is correct on this. WP:LEAD recommends three to four paragraphs for an article over 30kb, and at almost 60kb, four paragraphs is almost requisite. If you have suggestions for making the lead more concise without cutting length (is that an oxymoron?), I would love to hear them! Dana boomer (talk) 02:21, 9 March 2010 (UTC)


 * This quote, both lively and cutting, moved me: worth putting in a quote box with the context under, to break up the text, I'd say: Canada and the United States: "You can't make a cavalry charge until you have captured the enemy's last machine gun."[32]
 * Nice idea. Dana is working on the sourcing there, the blockquote idea may be good for visual appeal.   Montanabw (talk) 00:01, 9 March 2010 (UTC)
 * David wasn't able to find the actual name of the person who said it, but I don't think it's a huge deal. I've put the quote into a quote box, let me know what you think. Dana boomer (talk) 02:21, 9 March 2010 (UTC)


 * Some tables of statistics near the top of the article would also help get an overview, as well as break the relatively large areas of text. Perhaps prose representing only statistics could be cut altogether in favour of a table, thus allowing the reader to focus more on the separate aspects of narrative and statistics.
 * It's Dana's call, but I think that could be a challenge, as we have such variety it's hard to consolidate into a single table, apples and oranges, you know. Worth chewing on, though.  Montanabw (talk) 00:01, 9 March 2010 (UTC)
 * I have considered doing this, but the problem is finding similar data to compare for all (or even some) of the countries. Sources don't even all agree on how many horses were killed in the use of the British, and that is one of the most heavily studied areas of the subject. I know the Bulgarians used cavalry in the war, but in all of my searching could only find a passing mention of this. I have no solid numbers for horses used/killed in Russia, the Ottoman Empire, Germany, Austria, or Italy. All of this missing data would make a table confusing at best and incomprehensible at worst, IMO.


 * The relative emphasis of level 2 and 3 heading is very close and easy to forget as one reads (in the standard wiki format anyway), so the logistic support section reads as tacked on the end, being smaller than the sub sections of the cavalry section. Not glam, but could it go before the cavalry section? Could the cavalry section also be broken into the introductory section, and a new heading created such as "Theatres..." or, something more specific to which Army - there seems to be some crossover of specificity here too.
 * I've moved the logistical support section ahead of the cavalry section as a test. Check it out and let me know what you think. As for separating out the Cavalry section, I'm not really sure on this. I think that rearranging the information currently separated by country into sections by theatres would make for more redundancy. I believe that the way it is currently laid out makes it easier to show trends in how each individual country's usage of horses changed throughout the war. Also, I'm not sure why there would be a need to separate the introduction from the by-country sections - the introduction IMO provides a good overview of how cavalry was used and how that use changed before the article goes into a more in-depth discussion of each country's usage.
 * Not entirely sure this switch was an improvement, but I do see the value of putting the shorter bit first from a readability standpoint. I redid it a bit so the first thing we discuss in the article is NOT mules.  Hmmm.  We will have to redo the lead to match if we keep it this way, I'm willing to live with it for a few days to see how it feels.  I do NOT favor redoing the cavalry section to any significant extent, other than maybe to separate out the allies from the central powers a bit more, thus killing off the "Continental" section in favor of either nations or theaters of war, as after all, there wasn't really any action in the British Isles themselves. (Remember, I kind of wanted it that way a while back...)  Montanabw (talk) 02:42, 9 March 2010 (UTC)
 * I'm not entirely sure I like it either, but I thought I'd do it as a test and see what the reaction was. As for the cavalry section, splitting the europe section into eastern front/western front probably wouldn't work. Partially because Germany had horses on both fronts, but also because then we'd have a half-theatre, half-country split in the cavalry section, and people would be asking us why the UK info wasn't split the same way. I don't favor rewriting the entire cavalry section by theatre, as I said above, because I think it would introduce redundancy. What about keeping the Continental Europe section and adding subheaders for Allied nations and Central Powers? Or, separating the Europe section into "Germany and Austro-Hungary" and "Russia and France", which would keep the nations allied with each other together. I just don't want to get too many little sections in there, because then people will complain that its choppy. Dana boomer (talk) 12:50, 9 March 2010 (UTC)


 * My summary: a valuable, sobering, thought provoking article, well researched, but attention to presentation would make it more engaging. Hope this helps, Trev M (talk) 11:43, 8 March 2010 (UTC)
 * Thanks for your input! Good food for thought!   Montanabw (talk) 00:01, 9 March 2010 (UTC)
 * My thanks also for your input Trev. Please take a look at the changes I have made, and my responses when I didn't change something, and let me know what you think! Dana boomer (talk) 02:21, 9 March 2010 (UTC)

Photos
Found a photo from Gallipoli showing horses being landed from a ship, which might be of interest. Plus a more typical one showing use as draught animals. Gwinva (talk) 22:51, 7 March 2010 (UTC)
 * I really like both of those, and will add them in. A quick question on the draught animal one - are we sure those are horses and not mules? Those ears look really long... Dana boomer (talk) 23:11, 7 March 2010 (UTC)


 * Yep, they are mules. I really like both too, though, the offloading horses one might be good for the Ottoman Empire section because it's at Gallipoli. Not sure which side the soldiers are, but I did see something that looked like a Fez...  Montanabw (talk) 01:55, 8 March 2010 (UTC)
 * I think they're Kiwis, or at least ANZAC. The photos are from the New Zealand archives, at least. I'll get these added in tomorrow - it's getting late tonight. Thanks again, Gwinva! Dana boomer (talk) 03:43, 8 March 2010 (UTC)
 * OK, so I'm better at identifying soldiers than mules! They're ANZACs offloading for their Gallipoli Campaign; the ship might well be civilian...probably from Egypt.  (I'll change the commons photo name, to remove that "horse" bit!)  Gwinva (talk) 04:02, 8 March 2010 (UTC)


 * Hee Hee! Or, perhaps "Hee Haw!"   Montanabw (talk) 23:56, 8 March 2010 (UTC)

(undent) I've switched out the photos for a couple of more generic ones. Let me know what you think! Dana boomer (talk) 01:57, 9 March 2010 (UTC)
 * they look good. Gwinva (talk) 22:10, 9 March 2010 (UTC)

minor quibble
Why is there a section "Aust and NZ" without any mention of NZ? Gwinva (talk) 22:24, 8 March 2010 (UTC)


 * Cause Dana couldn't find anything? Got some good stuff we can add -- about the horses angle?   Montanabw (talk) 23:35, 8 March 2010 (UTC)
 * Actually mainly because I must have been completely asleep everytime I read that section, and honestly thought that we had more on ANZAC as a whole and less about Australia specifically. I've got some information, I'll add it in in a bit. (Although Gwinva, if you have any good tidbits, I would be more than happy to see them!) Dana boomer (talk) 23:39, 8 March 2010 (UTC)
 * I can probably find as much as you want. Off the top of my head, I do know the Anzac Mounted Division were 1/3 NZ, 2/3 Aust; that they carried rifles and machine guns, rather than cavalry sabres and sidearms like the British (in the anticipation they would usually dismount to fight); that they shipped their own horses to war, but at the conclusion of the war, the surviving horses couldn't be returned home, and most were taken into the desert and shot, which must have been devastating for the troops.  Gwinva (talk) 22:09, 9 March 2010 (UTC)
 * I've added a paragraph on ANZAC as a whole and did some trimming of the Australia stuff. It's still a little Aussie-heavy, but better, I hope? I've already got some stuff in the article on Aussie horses not being returned (besides one), but if you have something on the same happening to NZ horses I would love to add it in. Dana boomer (talk) 22:55, 9 March 2010 (UTC)
 * We can probably take the existing section, word it to say "Australia (existing footnote) and New Zealand (new footnote) ...blah, blah, blah. All we need is a good source!  By the way, G, now that you're back, pop over to HIMA, there's a dead link there, the darn armouries rearranged their web site (phooey!) Montanabw (talk) 23:41, 9 March 2010 (UTC)
 * Yeah, that's kind of what I was thinking - I just hadn't been able to find the sources yet, so I was hoping that Gwinva could bail me out :) Dana boomer (talk) 12:41, 10 March 2010 (UTC)
 * Can do. Busy day right now, but haven't forgotten.  Gwinva (talk) 21:18, 10 March 2010 (UTC)
 * Just added a bit to include NZ; don't want to do much for fear of undue weight; the section is already longer than the others, and does seem a bit UNDUE. The charge is good stuff, since it is the "last", but is the waler quote needed?   (It only refers to the Aust horses - I don't know what breed the NZ ones were, but there are similar quotes about them.) It could be moved to the Waler page, and replaced with a short reference to the Waler breed being respected. Gwinva (talk) 22:59, 14 March 2010 (UTC)
 * Thanks for the addition. I can see your point about the quote possibly being undue weight. However, I really liked it as it showed what the horses really went through during this war. To make it shorter we could remove the first and last sentences, if you think this should help, and it would remove the "Walers are the greatest, they can jump tall buildings" feel that the quote currently has. Just FYI, the quote is a cut down version of the one that is already in the Waler horse article, so we wouldn't need to worry about putting it over there if we decide to cut it here. Dana boomer (talk) 23:08, 14 March 2010 (UTC)
 * I never looked at Waler! :)  It is an interesting quote; my only concern was that by lengthening the ANZAC section it seems to inflate to inflate their importance (forget leaping buildings in single bounds..these folk won the whole damn war).... it would go quite nicely in  the "casualties" section (which covers more than casualties and could be retitled) under the bit about feeding and before the bit about bad conditions leading to death.  Talking of condition...I do remember reading one medical history which attributed all the human dysentery/disease/poor trench conditions to the presence of horses.  Could hunt it out again if that interested you.  Gwinva (talk) 23:17, 14 March 2010 (UTC)

(undent) I agree that it could easily be moved to the casualties section. Any ideas on what to rename the section to? I have realized for some time that it covers more than casualties, but haven't been able to come up with a title for the section that I really liked. Let's figure out a title and then I'll move the quote over. I would love to see that medical history, it would be great information to include, perhaps in the to-be-renamed casualties section. Dana boomer (talk) 23:30, 14 March 2010 (UTC)


 * I think it's fine as is. I tweaked a little bit of verbiage, but in terms of size, the section is about equal to the US/Canada one and shorter than the Continental Europe chunk, so I have no problems with it.  But if you want to rearrange more, not a problem with me.  Section looks OK to me.   Montanabw (talk) 04:45, 15 March 2010 (UTC)

Sanitation!
I looked up that medical quote. It's not as wonderfully concise as I remembered, but scattered over a few pages. How much do you want to make of it? War Surgery and Medicine notes that "The presence of horses in the lines in base camps in Egypt in the First World War made it difficult to maintain a high standard of hygiene". NZ Medical service notes further that "The condition of the battle field and back areas was insanitary to a serious degree. Flies were prevalent in unusual numbers and were found to be breeding freely in recent horse manure—nothing had been done on transport or waggon lines to check fly breeding". Sanitary officers supervised, amongst other things, the disposal of horse carcasses. NZ Medical Service also tells us about Capt. Lelean's sanitation rules (backed up by EE Austen's entomology research on flies and dysentery), including the "disposal of horse manure. A general routine order dated March 15th gave instructions that fresh manure from horse lines was to be taken to a site three quarters of a mile to leeward of the camp, there spread out to dry and subsequently burnt. A small tram line was constructed to carry out this order, but the process of burning not proving satisfactory, burial was resorted to.". The NZ Divisional Sanitary School (!) even gave lectures on "the Sanitation of Horse Lines". I've seen reviews and references of Lelean's "Sanitation in War", which seems to have been pretty influential, but there does not appear to be any text online.  As an additional point of interest, NZ War Effort notes various issues regarding veterinary care and diseases; it notes towards the end that "Experience proved that a horse over 15.2 hands was not suitable. Short-backed, thick-set horses 14.2 to 14.3 hands, or small thoroughbreds up to 15 hands, with good bone, symmetry and substance, proved the best." (Complete with the parochial comment that "the New Zealand horses of the proper type and build went through the difficulties extraordinarily well. They stood the hardships better than any other horses, except some of those from Australia". So there, Walers!) Gwinva (talk) 01:12, 16 March 2010 (UTC)


 * Fascinating. I'll defer to Dana on what to add, but I can certainly vouch for the unsuitability of horse manure for burning; we ignited some old tree branches on top of our compost heap to add a little ash to the mix, and the uncomposted horse poop that ignited with the branches smoldered for hours after the wood was long gone, it took forever to put out and there were still obvious horse turds at the end! Yet, compost the stuff properly, and in six months or less the inside of the pile looks and smells like garden soil!   LOL!  As for the small horse bit, hooray for smaller horses!  My favorites! (Why everyone thinks they need a horse over 15.2 has more to do with ego than utility, IMHO....)  Montanabw (talk) 02:16, 16 March 2010 (UTC)
 * I added a few sentences on the sanitation aspect to the Logistical support section to follow up the stuff on morale-boosting. I know that all doesn't really fit there, but I can't really figure out what else to do with it. Let me know what you think, anyways. I'll add the stuff on procurement tomorrow; I ran out of time today after doing a bit of chopping to make it less Brit-heavy in that section. Dana boomer (talk) 02:28, 17 March 2010 (UTC)


 * Worked for me, and a clever place to put it, IMHO. Adds balance.  I wouldn't correlate it as precisely the opposite of morale-boosting, that struck me as a bit awkward, but rather as simply the down side to having them around...which it was...  Montanabw (talk) 05:57, 17 March 2010 (UTC)
 * I think I've finished my additions of the above information. Gwinva, this has been a treasure trove of information, thank you so much for finding it! Please let me know if there is something important that I have left out... Dana boomer (talk) 00:53, 22 March 2010 (UTC)

Thoughts from PR
Hello to everyone who may be watching this page! A couple of comments have come up in the peer review that I would like further comments on:


 * Should links be made from each country to their corresponding "country in WWI" article (for example History of Germany during World War I)? This would probably include linking the first instance of each country in the lead and again in the body of the article. Another possibility would be to link through an inline see also template at the beginning of each section in the Cavalry section. The reviewer felt this would give the reader more context, while I feel it may be headed towards overlinking. Thoughts?
 * It was suggested that we might want to put the Procurement section before the Cavalry section - in other words to have it as the first section after the ToC. It would fit better with the timeline this way (how they got the horses, what they did with them, how they died/were injured, what happened after). I can see the pros and cons of both sides of this, and would like to hear further input from others before a final decision is made.

Thanks! Dana boomer (talk) 22:56, 16 March 2010 (UTC)


 * The nation linking maybe would be better done with the Main tags to the country in WWI articles than with wikilinks, which might wind up being dumped by someone who thinks you are just linking to nations. I don't know if moving the procurement section would work of not, I have to think about it.  Could work.  Keep the casualties section where it is, though.   Montanabw (talk) 00:02, 17 March 2010 (UTC)


 * Main or see also links would probably be better, since this article is more on the military aspects, articles like British Army during World War I, Indian Army during World War I, Military history of Australia during World War I etc might be better than the country-x in World War I articles, which tend to have more coverage of political issues, the home front etc. David Underdown (talk) 09:06, 17 March 2010 (UTC)
 * I suppose the right link depends on the topic of the section. My thinking is that what seems best can be popped in, and if there's something better out there then others can refine if needed?   Montanabw (talk) 18:09, 17 March 2010 (UTC)


 * I guess my main question is - are these links that we really need and people will use to gain more context, or will they be in there just for the sake of having more blue links? Also, consistency would be needed - an article about the British Army during the war is a lot different from an article about the whole of the Australian military during the war (especially when that article contains information about the home front, repatriation, etc). Also, per Template:WWI history by nation, the MHofAustralia is considered the same as the History of Germany one, just with different titles, as they both include information about the home front, politics, etc. Just a few thoughts. I honestly don't think the links are needed, but if it's decided that they are, I'll deal with it :) Dana boomer (talk) 20:55, 17 March 2010 (UTC)


 * Good point. I guess those who care can propose specific links and specific locations.  I don't, particularly with things so thoroughly wikilined in the text.   Montanabw (talk) 03:57, 19 March 2010 (UTC)


 * True, on second thought, First Australian Imperial Force is the most direct equivalent to the British Army and Indian Army articles-though there's little about horses in it. David Underdown (talk) 11:34, 25 March 2010 (UTC)

Cambrai
It's always been in th back of my mind that the Battle of Cambrai (1917) covers in one neat package much of what we discuss in this article, but until recently, didn't really have nay sources. The battle is now chiefly remembered as the first great tank battle, and also saw the first concerted use of aircraft in a ground attack role (by both sides), and more strategically raids to attack lines of communications further in the front to hinder resupply and reinforcement, and also key new artillery techniques, but cavalry was always planned to have a key role (WWI tanks were too slow to be much use in exploiting a breakout). Cavalry of the UK, Canada, India and Germany took part in mounted actions, and at various times were also thrown into the line dismounted when the situation became particularly desperate. Three VCs were awarded to cavalrymen, the Canadian Harcus Strachan, the Indian Gobind Singh (VC) were both for actions that were at least in part mounted (Singh had three horses shot out from under him when he was trying to carry messages from his unit to or from HQ, one literally cut in half by an artillery shell), and the British George William Burdett Clare was also a cavalryman, but his exploits seem to have been entirely dismouted. The book I've been reading, has a lot of first hand accounts from both sides, and in addition to the cavalry also talks about th euse of horses to rescue captured guns from no-man's land - one in particular describes how two teams of 16 horses each were taken out one night, each horse had its hooves covered with (empty) sandbags to reduce the noise from the shoes, tack and the chains and so on which were to be attached to the guns were wrapped in string, again to reduce the noise - even the drivers had sandbags wrapped around their boots to reduce noise from the stirrups. They successfully rescued the two guns, the two teams galloping back up hill, and then waited for about half an hour while the Germans plastered the road they had to go down to get back to British lines with an artillery barrage, and then calmy took them home.

The book also has some nice illustrations, many of which are photos from the Imperial War Museum that we may be able to make use of, I'll try to put some links up over the next few days and hopefully someone will be able to work out the copyright situation, and decide if they are worthwhile. David Underdown (talk) 11:15, 25 March 2010 (UTC)


 * Hopefully these two links will work, http://www.iwmcollections.org.uk/dbtw-wpd/exec/dbtwpub.dll?AC=NEXT_RECORD&XC=/dbtw-wpd/exec/dbtwpub.dll&BU=http%3A%2F%2Fwww.iwmcollections.org.uk%2FqryMain.php&TN=Uncat&SN=AUTO5783&SE=4012&RN=4&MR=25&TR=0&TX=1000&ES=0&CS=1&XP=&RF=allResults&EF=&DF=allDetails&RL=0&EL=0&DL=0&NP=1&ID=&MF=WPENGMSG.INI&MQ=&TI=0&DT=&ST=0&IR=0&NR=0&NB=0&SV=0&BG=0&FG=0&QS= is another of Indian Cavalry, but this time you can see they are carrying lances (there are a couple of others ffom the same time as the one we already have of the Deccan Horese before High Wood, but again closer up, and the lances and tack visible), and http://www.iwmcollections.org.uk/dbtw-wpd/exec/dbtwpub.dll?AC=NEXT_RECORD&XC=/dbtw-wpd/exec/dbtwpub.dll&BU=http%3A%2F%2Fwww.iwmcollections.org.uk%2FqryMain.php&TN=Uncat&SN=AUTO5783&SE=4012&RN=4&MR=25&TR=0&TX=1000&ES=0&CS=1&XP=&RF=allResults&EF=&DF=allDetails&RL=0&EL=0&DL=0&NP=1&ID=&MF=WPENGMSG.INI&MQ=&TI=0&DT=&ST=0&IR=0&NR=0&NB=0&SV=0&BG=0&FG=0&QS= is Strachan and the Fort Garry Horse.


 * Particualrly with the second image, maybe worth also looking for a copy in Canadian sources without the watermark. David Underdown (talk) 15:06, 25 March 2010 (UTC)


 * David, I apologize for the very slow response. I would like to add some of this information into the article. Below I have a proposed addition to the article; would you mind adding specific page numbers to the sentences?
 * Beginning in 1917, cavalry found themselves being used in battles besides tanks and aircraft, notably at the Battle of Cambrai. Cavalry was used to exploit breakthroughs in the lines that the slower tanks could not, and troops from Great Britain, Canada, India and Germany participated in mounted actions. Three Victoria Cross medals were awarded to cavalry men, including one to Indian Gobind Singh, who had three horses shot out from under him while carrying messages, one literally cut in half but an artillery shell.
 * Then, in another section, During the Battle of Cambrai in 1917, horses were used to recover guns captured by the British from no mans land. In one instance, two teams of sixteen horses each were taken out with hooves, tack and pulling chains wrapped to reduce noise. The teams successfully took the two guns, then returned them to British lines, despite needing to wait out an artillery barrage by German troops on the road they British needed to take.
 * Let me know what you think - feel free to copyedit, tweak anything I've gotten wrong in my paraphrasing, and/or add the page numbers directly into my text. Dana boomer (talk) 00:49, 11 April 2010 (UTC)
 * No worries, it';; probably take me a few days to sort out the pages numebrs. Cambrai is now rememebred as the first major tank battle - is it worth trying to find out some relative numbers of horses (or at least cavalry divisions) were involved versus numbers of tanks? David Underdown (talk) 20:38, 11 April 2010 (UTC)
 * They would at least be interesting numbers to see, even if we didn't end up including them. Thanks in advance for the page numbers. Dana boomer (talk) 22:41, 11 April 2010 (UTC)
 * The charge of the Mhow Brigade, principally 2nd Lancers (Gardner's Horse) which ultimately led to Singh VC is covered in pages 396–402. Incidentally this was an essentially succesful charge against a position with barbed wire entanglements and machine guns!  The rescue of the guns is 425–426 (the horses even jumped a trench while towing the guns back!). Strachan's VC is pages 191–193.  Can't now find the page for Clare's VC, but we could use the Commonwelath War Graves Commission cite on the article here instead.  There were 476 tanks available for the first day at Cambrai (page 69), the whole Cavalry Corps (United Kingdom) is listed in the order of battle on pages 450–451—45 cavalry regiments in total.  Though in the end not all of these saw action.  The one change of emphasis in your proposed text is to make it clear that it was hoped the cavalry would be able to exploit breakthroughs made by the other arms, in the end, for a variety of reasons (including msised opportunities, and in once instance a cavalry regiment being a little too shy of German machine guns) it didn't quite work out.  David Underdown (talk) 12:33, 15 April 2010 (UTC)

(undent) Thank you! Take a look at what I added and see what you think. Also, please let me know if you have any final comments on the article - I plan to ask my master copyeditor to take a look and then nominate it for FAC, most likely within a week. Dana boomer (talk) 22:49, 15 April 2010 (UTC)

Light horse memorials and poem
Can anyone work out where the memorial here is located? The light horse memorial mentioned in this article is the Mounted Memorial, Canberra, which is on ANZAC Parade (which I've added to the image caption and the article). But I don't know where this other memorial is - possibly it is the other replica in Albany, West Australia? So what I think we have is the original memorial in Port Said, Egypt (destroyed), and two later replicas (one in Albany, one in Canberra), and also the memorial here, which is set up in the Australian War Memorial's sculpture garden. Four different locations and four different memorials, but all connected. There is a great page here with lots of details on the Port Said and Albany war memorials (including an account of the destruction of the Port Said memorial), giving the dates of unveiling of three of the memorials I mention above (Port Said - 23 November 1932; Albany - 11 October 1964; Canberra - 19 August 1968). I suspect that the horse head that went on a 15-year loan (1985-2000) is the one mentioned in the 2009 news story above, with the picture of the bronze horse head (fragment from the Port Said monument) in the AWM sculpture garden. The page at that site for the Canberra memorial is here.

But I still don't know what memorial this one is, or where it is located! Anyway, quite apart from the memorial details, the poem (shown in the picture and mentioned in various places) should be noted as well.

On a different matter, I also found this collection of WWI horse stories, which looks like an official "Autralian Light Horse" website, but isn't that great on where its material is from. Carcharoth (talk) 01:24, 10 April 2010 (UTC)
 * The mystery memorial that I linked to above (the one with a poem on the plaque) is mentioned in our article on Tongala, Victoria: "In November 2003 a monument to the 24 Australian Light horse regiments and their horses was unveiled by Maurice Watson, aged 84, the last Light Horseman, who enlisted from Tongala. The statue, standing two metres, is of a horseman carrying an empty saddle, bridle and saddle cloth, walking away, head lowered. On a plaque beneath the statue is the poem Farewell Old War Horse, a tribute to the 120,000 Australian waler horses that went overseas in the First World War. Due to quarantine restrictions, only one horse returned to Australia, "Sandy", the mount of Major-General W.T. Bridges, who died at Gallipoli in May 1915." A picture of the statue is here. Carcharoth (talk) 02:25, 10 April 2010 (UTC)
 * Carcharoth, thanks for this new information. At this point, I want to be cautious of adding much new information on memorials, especially those that are commemorating the Light Horse units more than their mounts. I don't want the section to turn into a laundry list of memorials, and so I don't really want to add in more specific ones unless I can find some for countries not already represented (Central Powers memorials would be especially nice to add). As for the poems, I tweaked the content already there and added the ref you put above, but again, I don't really want to start a laundry list. Although the legacy of the horses is nice (memorials, poems, etc), I would like to keep this article focused on what the horses actually did during the war. If you disagree that this is the best way to handle this, please let me know - it's just where my thoughts are headed for the moment. Dana boomer (talk) 16:59, 10 April 2010 (UTC)
 * You are probably right to rein in my enthusiasm! :-) I just come across these things and I think "ooh, horses and WWI, I know who might be interested in that!". If I stop reading about memorials and read about battles, the information I find may be a bit more useful! Carcharoth (talk) 02:12, 11 April 2010 (UTC)

More Australian horse memorials
May be too much for this page, but I did a search for "horse" at the search page for the War Memorials in Australia website, and got 39 hits, and checked them all for WWI horse memorials or information, and put the relevant ones here. Hope some of that is of use (though I know not all of it will be and is better used in other articles, but putting it here for now). The ones of most interest (mostly those with actual sculpture, pictures or bas-reliefs of horses and mounted soldiers) I've marked with an asterisk (*) above. Carcharoth (talk) 02:08, 10 April 2010 (UTC)
 * *Tamworth Memorial to the Australian Light Horse (sculpture of a Whaler horse)
 * *Desert Mounted Corps Memorial - Canberra (already mentioned in article)
 * Australian Light Horse Memorial Park (not many details)
 * *Desert Mounted Corps Memorial - Albany (not yet mentioned in article)
 * Finley Light Horse Regiments Memorial ("Incised image of Light Horse Trooper and Horse")
 * *Tasmanian Light Horse Memorial (artwork of mounted soldiers)
 * Naracoorte Light Horse Roll of Honour (memorial includes depiction of a mounted Light Horseman)
 * Cowra Light Horse Memorial (history of a mounted unit)
 * Katherine Observer Unit Memorial (not WWI, but fascinating so posting here anyway)
 * 6th Australian Light Horse Memorial (plaque mentions "Men of the Light Horse")
 * *Ararat Cenotaph (North face - Bas-relief sculpture of soldiers mounted on a camel and on horses)
 * *Tongala RSL Mural (includes "The Light Horse Brigade charge and capture of Beersheba")
 * *Beer-Sheba Memorial Plaque (includes a famous charge by Australian light horsemen)
 * *Alexandra Soldiers Memorial (East face; Metal plaque; Bas-relief sculpture of charge of Light Horse)
 * *Manly War Memorial (NSW) (Oval bas relief sculpture on north face of north buttress - Lions and horsemen, bounded by words: A LITTLE ONE SHALL BECOME A THOUSAND AND A SMALL ONE A STRONG NATION ISA : 60.22; North west face - Bas relief sculpture in small alcove - Horse-drawn ambulance wagon)
 * Kalgoorlie War Memorial (Metal plaque below, Black and gold colour patch, ALH - AIF, A TRIBUTE TO THE MEN AND THEIR HORSES; 1914-18)
 * Shrine of Remembrance Unit Plaques - Army (some of these are horse units, and the picture is of the plaque for one of the Light Horse Field Ambulance units - gives an idea of how many mounted units there were)
 * Hi again Carcharoth! After seeing all of these, I would like to change the section on Australia in the memorials to read something like "Australia has many memorials to the Light Horse units and their horses. One of them, the Desert Mounted Corps Memorial in Canberra, contains the preserved head of Sandy, the only horse to return to Australia after World War I.". However, the above pages are not reliable sources, because they are on a private website that is not run/updated by an expert in the subject. Would you know where I could find a reliable source that lists some or all of the above memorials? Dana boomer (talk) 16:50, 10 April 2010 (UTC)
 * Some of the sources are given on the pages (those will be the most reliable ones). You have to scroll to the bottom of the pages. For example, the sources for the Canberra memorial are: "The Memorials of Anzac Parade, pamphlet produced by the National Capital Authority, Canberra, undated; Inglis, K. S., Sacred Places - War Memorials in the Australian Landscape, Melbourne University Press, Carlton South, 1999; The Inglis Collection in Australian War Memorial, AWM PR 00944; Herald, Melbourne, 27 December 1956; Daily Telegraph, Sydney, 27 December 1956; Mail, Adelaide, 17 October 1959; Sun-Herald, Sydney, 1 November 1959; Courier-Mail, Brisbane, 25 April 1961; Daily News, Perth, 17 November 1962." I agree that where someone does not cite their sources, we have to be careful, but just as with us, any source is only as reliable as the sources they themselves cite. Where the information is not sourced, it would be a starting point to finding a reliable source. Where someone cites their sources, what is left is to assess their reliability in reporting the sources (and at this point you have to ask how reliable Wikpedia editors are at accurately reporting their sources!). Anyway, I digress, though Ken Inglis is a reliable source, I can confirm, from my other reading (and from what his Wikipedia article says, which looks about right when compared to the author blurb in one of his books I have). But as for the Australian war memorials website, the person who maintained it died in 2006, and it is now (according to the home page) maintained in his memory, so a bit tricky there. There is a page here where the sources are listed. So if you want to use the material, what you will probably have to do is repeat the work already done (picking up any errors made) by going back to the original sources. That is, until and unless someone publishes something on this in a form that satisfies Wikipedia's standards. As I said, I realise much of this may not be suitable for use, and will require a lot of work to track down sources, but I'm pointing out what is out there. Carcharoth (talk) 02:08, 11 April 2010 (UTC)
 * So far I haven't been able to find a reliable source that gives a list of some or all of the light horse memorials. Until I do, I guess the information will just have to stay as it is in the article. If you come across something in the future, please let me know! Dana boomer (talk) 22:32, 15 April 2010 (UTC)

Image concerns
Per this request, I have concerns on the following images used in this version of the article:


 * File:RSG resting on road march (WWI).jpg: "Unknown" source... so how does one know it is by an "Official War Photographer" and is ?
 * I wondered if it was actually from the IWM, couldn't find this precise image but did find further details of File:Royal Scots Greys (France WWI) CO and Staff.jpg, which was previously credited to National Library of Scotland, which may well be the source of the image queried here. The second image does demonstrate that the Greys were accomapnied by an official photographer. David Underdown (talk) 09:43, 14 May 2010 (UTC)
 * File:Husaren am San.jpg: with an unknown author and date, how can this be (70 year pma)?


 * File:Cavalry charge by the Ottoman army in the Sinai.jpg: "American Colony, a Christian utopian society that formed in Jerusalem in 1881"; how is this a work of the US Federal Government? "The American Colony photographers produced two albums documenting the war in Palestine. As this album demonstrates, Colony members photographed close to the front lines (left page) and recorded official occasions such as the visit of Enver Pasha, Turkish Minister of War, to Palestine and the Sinai Front in 1916 (right page)." If the albums were published then, else since the publication is in "The physical exhibition will be on view at the Library through April 2, 2005" then since the photographer is unknown, copyrighted till 2037 (1916 + 121). Where is the mention of the American Colony abandoning their rights (by donation, they might have transferred the term of their copyrights to the LoC instead)?


 * File:British casualties at Le Cateaua.jpg from File:Morts britanniques à la bataille de Le Cateau.jpg: how is this ? Who took it?

These images, at the moment, are not complying with the image policies/guidelines. Jappalang (talk) 02:34, 14 May 2010 (UTC)
 * I have replaced the above images with these four:
 * File:Royal Scots Greys (France WWI) CO and Staff.jpg
 * This could be a bit discomforting for some other reviewers; the source used is, although similar, not the same photo. Jappalang (talk) 02:12, 15 May 2010 (UTC)
 * Oops my fault - though the chance of there being two phographers present at the same time seems slim. David Underdown (talk) 16:20, 15 May 2010 (UTC)
 * Well, Hohum found the original source and thankfully it credits it to "Official British war photographers". That seems good enough to claim for Crown Copyrights.  Interesting that the photo came from Haig's collection.  Jappalang (talk) 04:21, 25 May 2010 (UTC)
 * File:Bundesarchiv Bild 146-1970-073-17, Türkische Kavallerie südlich von Jerusalem.jpg
 * File:Bundesarchiv Bild 146-1970-075-50, Bei Chavignon, Arbeiten an Nachschubstraße.jpg
 * The German photos are fine. Jappalang (talk) 02:12, 15 May 2010 (UTC)
 * File:British horse team killed by shell.jpg
 * The War Illustrated is an English publication (see the results at the bottom of http://www.archive.org/search.php?query=The%20War%20illustrated); as such, it should be checked that the author of this photo or illustration has been dead beyond 70 years, is a government employee, or is not identified in the publication. Which volume/issue and page was this image found?  Jappalang (talk) 02:12, 15 May 2010 (UTC)
 * I hope these have better licensing! Dana boomer (talk) 17:31, 14 May 2010 (UTC)
 * The IWM has some photos (http://www.iwmcollections.org.uk/qryPhotoImg.php: set Period to the "First World War" and search Keywords for either "horses" or "animals". Just make sure that the author is clearly stated to be a UK government employee or can be proven to have passed beyond 70 years ago.  Jappalang (talk) 02:12, 15 May 2010 (UTC)


 * Swaps look good to me, I'm not a lot of help on licensing, but just wanted to say that I'm seriously impressed with what has been found.  Montanabw (talk) 21:10, 16 May 2010 (UTC)
 * I have switched out the British team for one I found on the IWM website of another veterinary procedure during the war, and uploaded the actual photo of the Royal Scots Greys from the IWM website, so that it should be legal now. I'm assuming it was mostly likely the same photographer, but I couldn't find a source for the original shot, so have uploaded over it until/unless a proper source can be provided for the original image. Dana boomer (talk) 00:33, 22 May 2010 (UTC)
 * I think it is all fine now. Jappalang (talk) 04:21, 25 May 2010 (UTC)

Missing cavalry formations
The British Indian Army contribution seems to be missing (or have I have missed it) - Cavalry Division (United Kingdom), 1st Indian Cavalry Division and the 2nd Indian Cavalry Division. The 1st and 2nd fought on the western front and in Egypt. Can you explain the reasoning behind the Canada and United States section as the Canadian brigade fought as part of the 3rd Cavalry Division (United Kingdom) would in not be netter to have a British Empire section which could include British, Canadian, ANZAC and the British Indian Army. --Jim Sweeney (talk) 14:02, 30 May 2010 (UTC)
 * Mainly because I didn't really find any sources for the British Indian Army other than brief mentions of their service, which is included in the Great Britain section. On the FAC, you can see we are discussing a possible rearrangement of the sections. The proposal at the moment, to which the reviewer has not yet responded, is to create an overall British Empire section within the cavalry section, which in turn has subsections on Britain, Canada, ANZAC, etc. The United States and Canada were grouped together due to geographic proximity, but I'm willing to change this if I can get some more input from various parties. Dana boomer (talk) 23:14, 30 May 2010 (UTC)


 * The Long Long Trail has been classed as a reliable source and has some good information here's the link to the main page []. --Jim Sweeney (talk) 07:00, 31 May 2010 (UTC)
 * Can you please link me to the discussion where this was classed as reliable? I have been a party to some A-class and GA reviews where this source was not considered reliable, although those were several months ago. Dana boomer (talk) 15:14, 31 May 2010 (UTC)

I did ask on the reliable sources sit and here is the response: Hi a question of this online site is it a reliable source ? Chris Baker he author says this about himself - As far as historical things are concerned, I was Chairman of the Western Front Association for two years and a member of the WFA Executive Committee for six; I was also a founder member of the WFA's Heart of England Branch. I am a member of the University of Birmingham Centre for First World War Studies and of the Douglas Haig Fellowship. In December 2007, I proudly graduated with a MA (with Distinction) in British First World War Studies from the University of Birmingham. My dissertation was on the Supreme War Council 1917-1918.
 * The Long, Long Trail


 * here is the link --Jim Sweeney (talk) 20:47, 26 May 2009 (UTC)


 * Do you have an idea what possible articles and in what context? -- Ricky81682 (talk) 01:00, 27 May 2009 (UTC)


 * Articles on World War I, which he seems to have a passion for --Jim Sweeney (talk) 06:46, 27 May 2009 (UTC)


 * Well, I'm thinking the standard would require (1) identification that he's an established expert (not merely his CV but independent third-party confirmation) and (2) his work had been published by reliable third-party publications. Google news doesn't produce anything but there are some cites at Google books and Google scholar.  Perhaps focus on those third-party cites first as this at best indicate some reputation for strict factual details, and keep out his opinions if possible?  I'm not really sure. -- Ricky81682 (talk) 09:14, 27 May 2009 (UTC)

So the way I read it as he's quoted in Google books and Google scholar he a reliable source. There was also a response a t a later date from a WPMILHIST admin who confirmed this but I never noted who it was. --Jim Sweeney (talk) 16:21, 31 May 2010 (UTC)

Jim, I've responded to your query about regarding this as an RS at the noticeboard, WP:RSN#The Long, Long Trail. In my view there are sufficient reasons to consider it as such, as I've explained there. I think I'd previously put something to this effect on the MilHist Britsh Work Group page. David Underdown (talk) 16:07, 4 June 2009 (UTC)
 * Found it from my talk:

Hope this helps. --Jim Sweeney (talk) 16:31, 31 May 2010 (UTC)
 * Thanks for the information. I have now rearranged the cavalry section along the lines I proposed on the FAC page, and added a small section on Indian cavalry. Please let me know what you think. Also, let me know if there's anything else you think needs to be done before the article is of FA status. Thanks! Dana boomer (talk) 13:57, 1 June 2010 (UTC)


 * The rearrangement looks good to me.  Montanabw (talk) 19:13, 1 June 2010 (UTC)

IWM "Animals at War" exhibition
Just found this pdf file http://london.iwm.org.uk/upload/package/74/AnimalsWar/images/AAW_CAPTIONS.pdf which has the exhibit captions from the Imperial War Museum's "Animals at War" exhibition. A few interesting snippets, such as the fact that it states teat 210 British horses were killed by poison gas during the war. David Underdown (talk) 12:56, 27 August 2010 (UTC)
 * Sorry for the slow reply, David. I've added a few bits that caught my eye - let me know if there was anything I missed. Dana boomer (talk) 16:23, 31 August 2010 (UTC)