Talk:Hortencio Pereira

Tone
While I do believe that the subject is notable (per the ongoing AfD; I would advise added some of the en-refs in the AfD to this article), the article needs a tidy up to meet WP writing style standards. In particular, I have flagged a section that includes long lists of names, which are not helpful to readability and are largely unreferenced. The article needs to stick more closely to the subject (e.g. what he did, what he said) as per WP:BLP, and avoid straying into the wider field in which he works in. It would help readers to reduce the size of the article which includes unnecessary/non-notable detail (i.e. if you can't find a WP:RS to specifically reference a sentence, it is probably not worth keeping). Britishfinance (talk) 16:39, 24 March 2019 (UTC)