Talk:Hoshu Sheedi/Archive 1

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Problems with this article
Firstly, there are several problems with this article which of course are at the top of the article. To the left of the article is "Languages" and in my opinion doesn't seem to appear to be the same article as the one on the english Wikipedia.

Secondly, I have contacted a few people from the article history to see they are willing to improve and clean up the article some how and to see if they have more knowledge about this article.

Thirdly, it needs to be assessed by the WikiProject Military History "B-Class" criteria otherwise it has created a backlog in both "tagging" and not assessesing "B-Class" criteria. Of course other WikiProject templates are also equally important as the WikiProject Military History.

If one or a few people could improve and clean up the article with an image and infobox even references. I am willing to assess the WikiProject templates on the talkpage. Adamdaley (talk) 22:55, 9 December 2011 (UTC)


 * There certainly was a Hoshu Sheedi (or Hosh Mohammed), and he seems to have become a folk-hero. As such myths and legends build up around these types of people ("Songs and stories" in the words of the only source I could quickly find). Therefore I have removed the tale of his death, though I expect that some of it will prove to be verifiable, and some not. All the refs were to personal websites, one dead link, one list of famous people and one with no mention of Sheedi. I removed them.  I have done what I can with what is left, but I think this is a stub-class article at best. Rich Farmbrough, 23:18, 9 December 2011 (UTC).


 * Farmbrough ... Thanks. As I've said on #Wikipedia-en-help channel on Freenode, I have no idea about this person.  There are probably books somewhere, but I'm not willing to go to an expensive amount to make it into a good article.  I am in the middle of re-writting 4 articles already while trying to do the WikiProject Military History Coordinator work which I've recently acquired and I've been doing the backlogs.  Especially the "B Class" criteria since it should only been upto 100, unfortunately it's over 26,525 articles!  Whoever has been helping me, we've decreased it by around 220 articles.  Adamdaley (talk) 03:11, 10 December 2011 (UTC)

Suggestions for Improvement
I found this article very good and was glad to see that there was already information written about Hosh Muhammed Sheedi and some of his exploits. However, I noticed that much of the latter part of the article does not actually relate to Hosh Muhammed, but rather to the state of his burial place. I was wondering if that information might not be better presented either under a separate heading, perhaps "Burial Site" or even in a separate article. Another issue would be the quote near the end of the article where "Sheedi" is cited as the speaker. Since the speaker is not actually Hosh Muhammed Sheedi, it should be more clearly explained who the speaker is, perhaps a Sheedi, or someone else. (I don't actually know who the speaker was) I hope these suggestions are helpful. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 198.53.6.129 (talk) 00:10, 26 September 2012 (UTC)

Neutrality
There is a tag dating from Feb 2015, questioning the neutrality of the article, nothing in the talk section justifies the tag, hence I am removing it. If need be, we can add back. Kanatonian (talk) 20:27, 15 August 2016 (UTC)

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