Talk:Hossein Ali Mirza/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Amitchell125 (talk · contribs) 20:00, 2 July 2021 (UTC)

Happy to review the article.

Failing the article
The article is full of good points, and I really enjoy reviewing articles about history from this period, but I am going to be failing the GAN because too much of the text needs to be corrected to improve the English.

I would suggest you submit it for copy editing at WikiProject_Guild_of_Copy_Editors/Requests (the process will take a few weeks before it gets done). Once the issues with the prose are sorted, I would then re-nominate the article. If you let me know when you have done this, I would be very happy to continue reviewing the article for you. Regards, Amitchell125 (talk) 15:24, 5 July 2021 (UTC)
 * fine with me. Amir Ghandi (talk) 16:28, 5 July 2021 (UTC)