Talk:Hot (Inna song)/GA2

GA Review
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Reviewer: Aoba47 (talk · contribs) 22:36, 18 December 2017 (UTC)


 * Grabbing this for a review. Aoba47 (talk) 22:36, 18 December 2017 (UTC)


 * Lead and infobox
 * I would change “first single” to “lead single”.
 * ✅ Cartoon network freak (talk) 17:48, 19 December 2017 (UTC)


 * I would change “a hook” to “the hook” and add a link for “hook”.
 * ✅ Cartoon network freak (talk) 17:48, 19 December 2017 (UTC)


 * Do we know the name of the person who provides the “male vocals”?
 * It's probably one guy from Play & Win, but no source supports this information, so no, we don't know that, unfortunately. Cartoon network freak (talk) 17:48, 19 December 2017 (UTC)


 * I would change “while nominated for an Eska Music Award in the same year” to “while it was nominated for an Eska Music Award in the same year”.
 * ✅ Cartoon network freak (talk) 17:48, 19 December 2017 (UTC)


 * I am not sure what you mean by this “while the second was meant to emphasize Inna's image”. Her image as what?
 * The clip focuses solely on her looks and does not have a plot. This means that the clip enphasizes how beautiful and bad-ass she is . Does that make any sense? Cartoon network freak (talk) 17:48, 19 December 2017 (UTC)
 * I am not a huge fan of the wording, but since it is from a source, I will allow it. Aoba47 (talk) 19:01, 19 December 2017 (UTC)


 * Background and composition
 * For this part (Adopting the stage name Alessandra in 2008, she approached a pop-rock style, which switched to "commercial" minimal-infused house music after changing her stage name to Inna.), I would avoid the repetition of “stage name” if possible.
 * I don't know any other words for "stage name". Do you? Cartoon network freak (talk) 17:48, 19 December 2017 (UTC)
 * I having difficulty with this as well so I will let it stand. Aoba47 (talk) 19:01, 19 December 2017 (UTC)


 * For this (On another occasion, Inna stated that the track emerged "out of a fun”), I think you are missing something. A fun what?
 * I think that expression does exist. It emerged out of messing around with sounds and beats → ...out of a fun
 * That is not an expression in English, at least to the best of my knowledge. I also could not fund this supported in the source. Could you point this out to me? Aoba47 (talk) 19:04, 19 December 2017 (UTC)
 * Romanian: Dintr-o joaca, insa, s-a nascut o piesa dance. → However, out of fun, a dance song was born. Maybe it does sound better without the "a" in "out of a fun"? Cartoon network freak (talk) 19:08, 19 December 2017 (UTC)
 * I would remove the "a" and then I will pass it. Aoba47 (talk) 19:09, 19 December 2017 (UTC)
 * Fixed; Cartoon network freak (talk) 19:12, 19 December 2017 (UTC)


 * Reception and accolades
 * Rather than using this phrase (, who discovered the track late,), I would just identify the year in which the review was written if it is important to note.
 * I just removed this, as it does not add much to the article. Other reviews were also written in that year. Cartoon network freak (talk) 17:48, 19 December 2017 (UTC)


 * I would link Ibiza?
 * ✅ Cartoon network freak (talk) 17:48, 19 December 2017 (UTC)


 * For this sentence (However, he negatively viewed the sense of its lyrics, comparing them to crosswords and jokingly stating that Inna was "more of a Sudoku girl”.), I would clarify that the critic is talking about how the lyrics are somewhat randomly thrown together. The quote is good, but some further clarity would be helpful for this part.
 * ✅ Is that better now? Cartoon network freak (talk) 17:48, 19 December 2017 (UTC)


 * I would suggest making the more mixed/negative reviews into its own paragraph.
 * ✅ Cartoon network freak (talk) 17:48, 19 December 2017 (UTC)


 * I would move the awards/nominations parts near the positive reception towards the song as it is rather odd to go from reading negative reviews to awards/nominations information.
 * ✅ Cartoon network freak (talk) 17:48, 19 December 2017 (UTC)


 * Commercial performance
 * Everything looks good here.
 * Thank you!! Cartoon network freak (talk) 17:48, 19 December 2017 (UTC)


 * True Love Edit
 * For this part (It was also known as the "True Love Edit" after its release on YouTube.), I would remove “also”.
 * ✅ Cartoon network freak (talk) 17:48, 19 December 2017 (UTC)


 * Dancing in the Dark Edit
 * For this part (It was also known as the "Dancing in the Dark Edit" during its release on YouTube.), I would remove “also”.
 * ✅ Cartoon network freak (talk) 17:48, 19 December 2017 (UTC)


 * Live performances and other usage
 * For this part (The first appearance was controversial for the exposure of one of her nipples.), I think you mean “The second appearance” as the exposure happened at Starfloor.
 * ✅ Yeah, you were right ;) Cartoon network freak (talk) 17:48, 19 December 2017 (UTC)


 * For this part (where she arrived by helicopter "like a diva”.), I do not believe that the quote is needed so I would remove it. It comes across more like a fan than something for an encyclopedia.
 * ✅ Cartoon network freak (talk) 17:48, 19 December 2017 (UTC)


 * Final comments
 * Good work on this. Once my comments are addressed, I will pass this. Have a wonderful day or night. I will get to the review for the other song tomorrow if that is okay with you. Aoba47 (talk) 23:14, 18 December 2017 (UTC)
 * Thank you very much! I've answered to all your comments! Best; Cartoon network freak (talk) 17:48, 19 December 2017 (UTC)


 * Verdict
 * Thank you for addressing everything! I will ✅ this. Aoba47 (talk) 19:15, 19 December 2017 (UTC)