Talk:Hot to the Touch/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Miyagawa (talk · contribs) 08:30, 4 July 2015 (UTC)

Picking this one up for a review over the weekend. Miyagawa (talk) 08:30, 4 July 2015 (UTC)

Criteria
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Discussion

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 * Should include Andy Milonakis' full name the first time he's mentioned and link him in.
 * Could you add something to the critical response to explain why it was received positively?


 * Having read the article through, that is all I can find to stop this from being passed! Nice job. Miyagawa (talk) 09:47, 5 July 2015 (UTC)
 * OK, how does this look?-- Gen. Quon   (Talk)   16:23, 5 July 2015 (UTC)
 * Great, happy to promote now. Miyagawa (talk) 16:54, 5 July 2015 (UTC)