Talk:Hotel Wolcott/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Bruxton (talk · contribs) 03:30, 14 March 2024 (UTC)


 * Happy to review this article. It may take me more than a week because I am traveling. Bruxton (talk) 03:30, 14 March 2024 (UTC)
 * Thanks Bruxton, I appreciate it. And feel free to take your time. Epicgenius (talk) 13:46, 14 March 2024 (UTC)

Lead
good lead summary. All of the elements are cited in the body and the lead summarizes the article.

Grammar

 * consider removing had from "42nd Street had contained brownstones"
 * "and eastern elevations contain plain brick facades" consider "and eastern elevations have plain brick facades"
 * "to the west (right) are a wood-and-glass door" consider "is"
 * "The third through eighth stories contain a pink-brick facade" consider "have" a pink...
 * "the two center bays of the Wolcott's facade has oriel windows" consider "have"
 * "Near the center of the hotel, there were also a palm room to the left of the lobby" consider "was".
 * "The ground story also contains a ballroom covering 3,500" consider has instead of contains
 * "little chicken that come unplucked from the Jersey farms" does the quote say "come" or came?
 * "the hotel become a shelter for homeless former prisoners" consider "became"
 * I have done all of the above. Regarding the chicken quote, the original source says "come", as it was a contemporary brochure published from the time of the hotel's opening. Epicgenius (talk) 13:45, 14 March 2024 (UTC)

Other

 * I think per MOS:ORDER we need to move the portal bar below the navigation footer templates
 * I have fixed this. Thanks for the review. Epicgenius (talk) 22:00, 18 March 2024 (UTC)

Images

 * Images are relevant and free

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