Talk:Hours (David Bowie album)/GA1

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Reviewer: Jens Lallensack (talk · contribs) 16:45, 14 January 2022 (UTC)

Reviewing now. --Jens Lallensack (talk) 16:45, 14 January 2022 (UTC)
 * Inspired by the Pietà – not sure, but the "the" somehow implies that a particular Pieta is meant here? If so, which?
 * I just used what my sources and the wiki page itself used, which is mostly "the" Pieta – zmbro (talk) (cont) 17:47, 14 January 2022 (UTC)


 * Aside from mixing a potential live album from the Earthling Tour, later released in 1999 as LiveAndWell.com, the only studio recording Bowie released in 1998 was – "Aside from" does not seem to fit here because that live album was apparently not released 1998?
 * Reworded. That better?


 * was examined by Bowie as "probably the most tragic song on the album",[2] "Survive" – that is confusing; better place a "." instead of a ","?
 * Yep, fixed


 * as an "angel of promise" is an angel who "heralds a covenant with God" – You use many quotes, but not always state which person is attributed to them, and in this example, I'm not sure from which source the quote is from..
 * Properly attributed


 * the track uses the Japanese koto[2] Perone believes it does – dot missing?
 * Yep, my bad.


 * it links the two tracks its sequenced between – "it is"? --Jens Lallensack (talk) 17:35, 14 January 2022 (UTC)
 * Yep, fixed


 * set the whole thing alight...Lee Stewart did the
 * Does the ellipse need spaces?
 * Fixed


 * Survive" was released as the third single – quotation marks or not?
 * Oops. Fixed
 * Done. Thanks for quickly reviewing! – zmbro (talk) (cont) 17:47, 14 January 2022 (UTC)
 * You are welcome. I wasn't done yet, though; but just two more points above! --Jens Lallensack (talk) 19:24, 14 January 2022 (UTC)
 * Haha my bad, I tend to work fast. All done! – zmbro (talk) (cont) 19:41, 14 January 2022 (UTC)
 * Nice! Very solid work, promoting now. --Jens Lallensack (talk) 19:42, 14 January 2022 (UTC)