Talk:House of Balloons / Glass Table Girls/GA1

GA Review
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Nominator: 22:22, 5 April 2024 (UTC)

Reviewer: Pollosito (talk · contribs) 17:07, 6 April 2024 (UTC)


 * GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)


 * 1) It is reasonably well written.
 * a (prose, spelling, and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
 * 1) It is factually accurate and verifiable, as shown by a source spot-check.
 * a (reference section): b (inline citations to reliable sources):  c (OR):  d (copyvio and plagiarism):
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a (major aspects): b (focused):
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free content have non-free use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free content have non-free use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:

Hi, @AskeeaeWiki. I will be reviewing this article perhaps starting now (because today I'm going to my church's connection group, so my schedule is a little tight) to give you 2 GAs. Now I'm a little more confident in reviewing what happened in I Feel It Coming. Thank you for being so kind to me in the process. I assume you're sleeping for now, so I'll take the opportunity to put in as many observations as possible to speed up the process. Santi (talk) 17:07, 6 April 2024 (UTC)

Infobox

 * Since I realize that Trilogy is a compilation album, there is no need to mention it.

Background and production

 * "As McKinney played the Weeknd instrumentals for consideration" => "As McKinney played songs to the Weeknd for consideration"
 * Replace in ref 4 "cbc.ca" to "CBC". Wikilink.
 * Link Billboard on ref 5.
 * Add info about the song's inclusion on both album.
 * "On November 13, 2012, it was reissued as a part of his compilation album, Trilogy." => "Afterwards, it was included on the Weeknd's compilation album, Trilogy, on November 13, 2012."
 * Link compilation album.
 * "On November 13, 2012, it was reissued as a part of his compilation album, Trilogy." => "Afterwards, it was included on the Weeknd's compilation album, Trilogy, on November 13, 2012."
 * Link compilation album.
 * Link compilation album.
 * Link compilation album.

Music and lyrics

 * Reference 6 does not explicitly mention about a party. That's more what Billboard did.
 * Move the ref 5 from "at the end" to "to sex."
 * Move ref 1 from infobox to this section and complement the prose with it, which says that the song is alternative R&B. That source also needs authorship.
 * Link Impact.
 * Authorship for ref 8 (Daria Paterek)
 * Link Impact.
 * Authorship for ref 8 (Daria Paterek)
 * Authorship for ref 8 (Daria Paterek)
 * Authorship for ref 8 (Daria Paterek)

Critical reception

 * "Pitchfork later placed it on its list of top 100 songs of 2011 at #57, with Eric Grandy saying it was "Tesfaye at his best, emoting in a androgynous falsetto one minute, muttering unbelievable curses the next." " => "They later ranked it at number 57 on their list of Top 100 Songs, with Eric Grandy saying it was "Tesfaye at his best, emoting in a androgynous falsetto one minute, muttering unbelievable curses the next." " Since the name of the author of the first Pitchfork article is not mentioned in this article, this practice is acceptable.
 * Change template to "cite magazine" in ref 7 and move "Rolling Stone" from "author1" to "magazine".
 * "Rolling Stone declared "House of Balloons / Glass Table Girls" as the Weeknd's 9th best track, " => "ranked"
 * "Rolling Stone placed the first part of the song at #488 on its 2021 and 2024 edition of the 500 best songs of all time." => "They also ranked its first part 488th on their 2021 revision of the 500 Greatest Songs of All Time." Move to the next paragraph.
 * Problems with ref 12.
 * "Complex further wrote" => "They further wrote"
 * Reuse ref 13 after "melancholic R&B." and add authorship.
 * Problems with ref 12.
 * "Complex further wrote" => "They further wrote"
 * Reuse ref 13 after "melancholic R&B." and add authorship.
 * "Complex further wrote" => "They further wrote"
 * Reuse ref 13 after "melancholic R&B." and add authorship.
 * Reuse ref 13 after "melancholic R&B." and add authorship.

Live performances

 * "The Weeknd performed the song for his first ever show in the United States." Is it another show or the Coachella one?
 * It is the Coachella one, I cleared that up.
 * Link "Billboard" in ref 15.
 * Fix ref 21.
 * Fix ref 21.

Personnel

 * Modify the structure of the reference a little. " " => "  " Can it be archived?
 * : When I attempted to archive it, the website did not load.

Certifications

 * Passed.
 * Delete "Notes" section.

Comments

 * Believe me. There are times when my English listening becomes terrible. I say this because I listened to the Tom Power podcast episode referenced from the article, and I didn't hear the words "freestyle" and "demo", at least not explicitly. So, since you're a very honest editor, then I'll assume that part is fine. Santi (talk) 20:01, 7 April 2024 (UTC)
 * I will replace this, the Glass Table Girls demo is not mentioned and 25 minute-"House of Balloons" is not noted as a freestyle. 𝘮𝘪𝘤𝘩𝘢𝘦𝘭'𝘴 𝘥𝘦𝘢𝘳 𝘮𝘦𝘭𝘢𝘯𝘤𝘩𝘰𝘭𝘺, 20:20, 7 April 2024 (UTC)
 * OK. I'll make slight edits to the prose and approve the article at once. Santi (talk) 21:43, 7 April 2024 (UTC)
 * @AskeeaeWiki: Before passing the article, I would like to know your opinion on the new summary of the article. We're practically done! Santi (talk) 23:07, 7 April 2024 (UTC)
 * @Pollosito All looks good! I see you're reviewing the article for "You're Losing Me", so good luck! I usually listen to the song while reviewing or expanding an article, it helped me a lot for both I Feel It Coming and Classy 101! You're a great reviewer, and I'm glad you're starting to become more confident! 𝘮𝘪𝘤𝘩𝘢𝘦𝘭'𝘴 𝘥𝘦𝘢𝘳 𝘮𝘦𝘭𝘢𝘯𝘤𝘩𝘰𝘭𝘺, 23:11, 7 April 2024 (UTC)
 * Good job! . Santi (talk) 23:12, 7 April 2024 (UTC)