Talk:House of Flavors/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Some Dude From North Carolina (talk · contribs) 00:09, 26 March 2021 (UTC)

Hey, I'm going to be reviewing this article. Expect comments by the end of the week.  Some Dude From North Carolina  (talk) 00:09, 26 March 2021 (UTC)

Infobox and lead
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 * For the infobox, I suggest using "plainlist" instead of
 * ✅ --Doug Coldwell (talk) 20:38, 26 March 2021 (UTC)


 * The lead also needs to be expanded to better summarize the article.
 * ✅ --Doug Coldwell (talk) 20:38, 26 March 2021 (UTC)

History

 * Add a serial comma after "buttermilk".
 * ✅ --Doug Coldwell (talk) 20:45, 26 March 2021 (UTC)


 * Remove the comma after "Park Dairy".
 * ✅ --Doug Coldwell (talk) 20:45, 26 March 2021 (UTC)


 * "to producing" "on producing"
 * ✅ --Doug Coldwell (talk) 20:45, 26 March 2021 (UTC)


 * Add a comma after "different varieties".
 * ✅ --Doug Coldwell (talk) 20:45, 26 March 2021 (UTC)

Operations

 * "Afterwards" "Afterward" (American English)
 * ✅ --Doug Coldwell (talk) 20:51, 26 March 2021 (UTC)


 * "that features" ", which features"
 * ✅ --Doug Coldwell (talk) 20:51, 26 March 2021 (UTC)


 * "popular to" "popular in"
 * ✅ --Doug Coldwell (talk) 20:51, 26 March 2021 (UTC)

Guinness Record attempt

 * ✅ --Doug Coldwell (talk) 21:03, 26 March 2021 (UTC)
 * ✅ --Doug Coldwell (talk) 21:03, 26 March 2021 (UTC)


 * Those videos near the bottom look messy on my screen and I'm not sure if they're necessary.
 * ✅ Organized section for better display of picture and videos.--Doug Coldwell (talk) 21:03, 26 March 2021 (UTC)