Talk:How About a Friendly Shrink?/GA1

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Reviewer:  The left orium  12:57, 1 April 2010 (UTC)

Nice work on the article Hunter! Here's my suggestions: Good luck! :)  The left orium  12:57, 1 April 2010 (UTC)
 * "How About a Friendly Shrink?" received generally positive mixed reviews – Wouldn't "received mixed to positive reviews" sound better?
 * lowest rating for an individual Desperate Housewives in series history – "the series' history"? (appears in the Reception section too)
 * which he won't let Lynette read – "he will not let"
 * what she's sure is – "she is"
 * he can't reach – "he cannot"
 * Gabrielle initially suspects her daughter Juanita + Susan is pleased that her son M.J. – will avoid confusion to people not familiar with the show (like myself)
 * Angie takes an instant dislike to her son Danny's – same as above
 * who is in the Leopards, are among the slow group – shouldn't this say "is among"?
 * seems to understand what he's been through – "he has"
 * the person she's become – "she has"
 * Link Wisteria Lane
 * The episode marked the return of
 * when her character suffered a nervous breakdown – you can't say "when her character" because Katherine Mayfair is a character
 * Reeves is the third former –> Leeves
 * Link "rating" and "share" to Nielsen_ratings
 * Link You Gotta Get a Gimmick
 * praised the episode, and said she was – no need for a comma here
 * Try to avoid repetition of the word "said" in the second and third paragraphs of the reception section
 * Can you move the quotation box to the left? The image above gets in the way.
 * Thanks Leftorium! I think I responded to everything. (It should have been "mixed reviews", not "positive mixed".) Let me know if there's anything else! —  Hun ter   Ka  hn  14:05, 1 April 2010 (UTC)
 * Nice work! I'll pass the article.  The left orium  14:11, 1 April 2010 (UTC)