Talk:How Brown Saw the Baseball Game/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Khazar2 (talk · contribs) 01:16, 22 November 2013 (UTC)

Hey Taylor, I'll be glad to take this one. Comments to follow in the next 1-5 days. Thanks in advance for your work on it. -- Khazar2 (talk) 01:16, 22 November 2013 (UTC)
 * Whoa, that's unusually quick. Thanks!  Taylor Trescott  - my talk + my edits 01:52, 22 November 2013 (UTC)
 * My pleasure. I like to get a jump on to the film ones before others beat me to them. Got distracted by other projects today but should post an initial review tomorrow. Cheers, Khazar2 (talk) 03:26, 23 November 2013 (UTC)


 * "Advertisements for the film branded it as "such fun."[9]" -- normally I'd say a quote from the advertising might be excessive detail, but in this case there's so little that we should probably leave it.

Okay, I don't see any significant problems here on first pass. Actually, I don't even see any trivial problems here on the first pass; this might be my first in 350+ GA review where I don't make a single edit. Very nice work on this. Let me turn to the checklist. -- Khazar2 (talk) 12:00, 23 November 2013 (UTC)