Talk:How Will I Know/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Candy  o32  - Merry CHRISTmas :)  19:32, 27 December 2010 (UTC)

Lead & infobox

 * Record label is a pretty common term in a music article, so it doesn't need to be linked


 * Say that it also reached the top ten in Sweden, Norway, and United Kingdom, and the top twenty in the Netherlands, New Zealand and Switzerland.


 * "The 3rd MTV Video Music Awards" --> 1986 MTV Video Music Awards


 * "in the categories of "Best Female Video" and "Best New Artist in a Video", and won in the category of "Best Female Video"." ---> in the categories of "Best Female Video" and "Bets New Artist in a Video," winning the previous category.


 * Use of synths does not make a song synthpop.

Background

 * remove "she said" and just merge into one quote.


 * "that they relinquish" Sounds weird.. should it be that they would relinquish" ?
 * Corrected it to that they should relinquish.


 * Aretha album needs to be italicized.


 * Lots of instances where she is referred to as "Whitney." Make it non personal and state "the singer" or "Houston."

Composition

 * It says and is linked to dance here but in the infobox it is dance-pop. Which one?
 * Dance-pop.


 * I question the reliability of Pandora, which I left on your talk.
 * Removed Pandora references.

Critical reception

 * I don't see the purpose of putting some words in the [ ] brackets. If the writer made a mistake or something use the [sic] temp.

Chart performance

 * On the issue date --> On the issue dated

Everything else unnoted is good! Candy o32  - Merry CHRISTmas :)  19:32, 27 December 2010 (UTC)