Talk:How the Snake Lost Its Legs/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Dunkleosteus77 (talk · contribs) 01:18, 13 May 2018 (UTC)
 * Many thanks for taking this on. Chiswick Chap (talk) 04:53, 13 May 2018 (UTC)

Comments by Dunkleosteus77

 * Why is ref no. 3 a link to a google scholar search?  User:Dunkleosteus77 &#124;push to talk 01:18, 13 May 2018 (UTC)
 * Gone, guess ref 2 is sufficient context.


 * The second, third, and fifth paragraphs in the Contents section needs a ref at the end
 * Added.


 * I think the Publication, illustrations section could just be titled Publications  User:Dunkleosteus77 &#124;push to talk 01:18, 13 May 2018 (UTC)
 * Done.


 * "As a result, 'The essay, thus, works...' " little redundant  User:Dunkleosteus77 &#124;push to talk 01:18, 13 May 2018 (UTC)
 * Gone.


 * I did a little copyediting so I guess that's that  User:Dunkleosteus77 &#124;push to talk 01:18, 13 May 2018 (UTC)
 * Thanks for doing that. Chiswick Chap (talk) 05:12, 13 May 2018 (UTC)