Talk:Howard Bellamy (Doctors)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Some Dude From North Carolina (talk · contribs) 19:26, 22 March 2021 (UTC)

Hey, I'm going to be reviewing this article. Expect comments by the end of the week.  Some Dude From North Carolina  (talk) 19:26, 22 March 2021 (UTC)

Basic stuff and comments

 * Infobox looks good.
 * Thank you! – DarkGlow (contribs • talk) 21:34, 22 March 2021 (UTC)
 * The lead should summarize the entire article, so mention info from #Casting and #Development.
 * ✅ – DarkGlow (contribs • talk) 21:34, 22 March 2021 (UTC)
 * The storylines section looks good.
 * Thank you! – DarkGlow (contribs • talk) 21:34, 22 March 2021 (UTC)
 * Remove the comma after Julia Parsons.
 * ✅ – DarkGlow (contribs • talk) 21:34, 22 March 2021 (UTC)
 * Also remove the comma after "the situation".
 * ✅ – DarkGlow (contribs • talk) 21:34, 22 March 2021 (UTC)
 * Recite references at the end of each quote per WP:REF.
 * ✅ – DarkGlow (contribs • talk) 21:34, 22 March 2021 (UTC)
 * Also try reducing the amounts of quotations overall.
 * ✅ – DarkGlow (contribs • talk) 21:34, 22 March 2021 (UTC)
 * Be consistent on either having Digital Spy or Digital Spy.
 * ✅ – DarkGlow (contribs • talk) 21:34, 22 March 2021 (UTC)
 * Link Digital Spy only once in #Characterisation.
 * ✅ – DarkGlow (contribs • talk) 21:34, 22 March 2021 (UTC)
 * Add a serial comma after "Hollyoaks".
 * ✅ – DarkGlow (contribs • talk) 21:34, 22 March 2021 (UTC)
 * Archive all sources (either manually or with this tool).
 * ✅ – DarkGlow (contribs • talk) 21:34, 22 March 2021 (UTC)

Responded to your comments – DarkGlow (contribs • talk) 00:01, 23 March 2021 (UTC)