Talk:Howling Bells (album)/GA2

GA Review
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Reviewer: Rp0211  (talk2me)  03:49, 27 June 2011 (UTC)

UPDATED REVIEW I am going to give you a chance to fix the mistakes presented and/or defend the ones you believe don't affect good article nomination. - Rp0211  (talk2me)  01:38, 29 June 2011 (UTC)
 * This user has refused to fix these changes, therefore the article fails at good article nomination at this time. Rp0211  (talk2me)  05:39, 30 June 2011 (UTC)


 * 1) Is it reasonably well written?
 * A. Prose quality:
 * B. MoS compliance for lead, layout, words to watch, fiction, and lists:
 * 1) Is it factually accurate and verifiable?
 * A. References to sources:
 * B. Citation of reliable sources where necessary:
 * C. No original research:
 * 1) Is it broad in its coverage?
 * A. Major aspects:
 * B. Focused:
 * 1) Is it neutral?
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) Is it stable?
 * No edit wars, etc:
 * 1) Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
 * A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:
 * B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass or Fail:
 * 1) Is it stable?
 * No edit wars, etc:
 * 1) Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
 * A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:
 * B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass or Fail:
 * B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass or Fail:
 * Pass or Fail:

Background
 * This section seems fine; needs "Record and getting signed" and "Artwork" as subsections

Record and getting signed
 * The "Record and getting signed" section should be a subsection in the "Background" section

Singles
 * The released date of the singles should be stated separately for each individual single
 * Discuss each single and everything about it (music video, release date, chart history) in separate, individual paragraphs
 * Difficult to follow at times because of disorganization of details
 * "Four of the album's singles appeared on the UK Singles Chart..." - Specify which singles
 * "...where it peaked inside the Top 80." - Specify what number it was on the chart
 * "The video for "Blessed Night" was shot from inside a 1976 Buick LeSabre Custom Coupe." - No reference

Artwork
 * Should be a subsection in "Background" section

Promotion, release and reception
 * "They played Camden Crawl and the NME New Music Tour." - Doesn't make sense
 * "Niall O'Keeffe noted its depth and range..." - Specify who Niall O' Keeffe is
 * "Chris Waugh admired Joel's guitar playing..." - Specify who Chris Waugh is
 * "Richard Hughes drew comparisons..." - Specify who Richard Hughes is
 * "Less favourable reviews came from David Renshaw..." - Specify who David Renshaw is
 * "Tim DiGravina wrote that..." - Specify who Tim DiGravina is
 * "Emily Mackay compared the band..." - Specify who Emily Mackay is

Track listing
 * You need to write whoever writes each song in the track list. Here is a basis to guide off of:
 * - Write the full name of the person on the first song. If they have written another song, just put their last name on each song they write.


 * There is no reference to source ALL of the information in this section

Personnel
 * There is no working reference to support the information in this section; please find another source

Release history, charts, accolades
 * Each section should be a subsection, not bold-faced
 * No references for singles chart information

References
 * Most of the references seem OK, but others are either inactive or do not cite the information given in the sections