Talk:Howmet TX/GA1

GA Review
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--  ThinkBlue  (Hit BLUE) 01:32, 12 June 2008 (UTC)


 * Regarding Prose, the term Initially has been replaced in a few sentences, and the other sentence has been changed to There.
 * For Citations, the paragraph covering the brief history of turbine cars has had references added for each individual car mentioned. However, for the latter paragraphs regarding the setup of the Howmet's turbine, the single source provided for the two paragraphs does reference everything mentioned, and I have as of yet been unable to find another source which covers these specifics, but I have added a second citation from teh Ray Heppenstall interview which also discusses everything in these two paragraphs.  The Later Use sections have had a reference added regarding the whereabouts of #GTP3, and I've altered the sentence regarding Heppenstall's ownership to merely state that Heppenstall did purchase the TXs from Howmet, but that they are (obviously) no longer in his ownership.
 * Regarding Neutrality, I've altered thw two sentences mentioned so that they make more sense and are indeed neutral. The359 (talk) 21:45, 16 June 2008 (UTC)
 * Well, after reading the article, I have gone off and passed the article. Congratulations. If you feel that this review is in error, feel free to take it to a GA review. Thank you to all who worked hard to bring it to this status, and congratulations. --  ThinkBlue  (Hit BLUE) 23:05, 16 June 2008 (UTC)
 * No worries here, thanks for yout time (and patience), much appreciated. The359 (talk) 23:12, 16 June 2008 (UTC)
 * Its no problem at all. ;) --  ThinkBlue  (Hit BLUE) 23:17, 16 June 2008 (UTC)