Talk:Hsu Tain-tsair/GA1

GA Review
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Hello. I'll be performing the GA review for this article. I see it has had several reviews before, and a lot of the issues brought up by other reviewers have been addressed. With that said, here are some more suggestions for improvement: The article will be on hold for seven days to allow for improvements. Good luck. Nikki 311  02:09, 19 June 2008 (UTC)
 * For the references in a foreign language, add the |language=example| into the reference template parameter. Obviously, exchange the word example for the appropriate language.
 * Along those same lines, add Template:Languageicon to the external links that aren't in English.
 * Per WP:LEAD, an article of this size should be two or three full paragraphs summarizing all the main points of the article. In the least, I think more from the mayoralty section should be added in.
 * "which is one of the top senior high schools in Taipei" - this particular part of the first paragraph in the early years isn't covered in the reference. It needs a ref of its own, or it can just be removed.
 * "which created business opportunities and tourism revenue." - source?
 * "Nearly 80 percent of the city's residents approved of the efforts of Hsu and his administration in turning the southern city into a clean and beautiful metropolitan area." - that claim most definitely needs a citation. I checked #18 and #19, but neither had that info.
 * Can the tables in the Electoral history be made into two columns? It would eliminate all that extra white space.
 * The article could also use a really good copyedit. I'd be happy to do that if everything else gets taken care of.

✅ All done-- Jerrch 21:20, 19 June 2008 (UTC)

Great work. This article has been much improved since its first nomination and now meets all the GA criteria. I'll pass the article. Nikki 311  22:41, 21 June 2008 (UTC)


 * Thank you!-- Jerrch 01:33, 22 June 2008 (UTC)